Question

13．假定你是李华．晚上要去参加你班同学的生日聚会．请你编一条微信发送给你的妈妈，详细告知以下内容：
1．晚饭已经做好；2．晚饭后替他喂鸟；3．邻居赵阿姨来电约她晚饭后公园散步．
注意：1．词数100左右； 
    2．开头部分已写好，不计入总词数； 
      3．可适当增加细节以使行文连贯．
Dear Mom，
                                                                 
                                                       Love，
                                                          Lihua．

Answer 1

分析 这是一封微信．根据题目要求可知用第一人称来叙述，时态以一般现在时态和一般将来时为主．内容包括：一 说明原因；二 交代晚餐，喂鸟以及赵阿姨的邀请；三 做出保证，让妈妈放心．
高分句型：
1．As I told you yesterday，I'm going to take part in my classmate，Liu Hua's birthday party tonight．句子里as引导定语从句，表示"正如"．
正如昨天我告诉你的，今晚我去参加同学，刘华的生日聚会．
2．Besides，please feed the bird after supper for me，whose food is in the box below the cage．句子里 whose 引导定语从句，不是"…的"．
此外，你可以在晚餐后喂鸟吗，它的食物在笼子底下．

解答 Dear Mom，
As I told you yesterday，I'm going to take part in my classmate，Liu Hua's birthday party tonight．【高分句型一】（说明原因） So I won't  have supper at home．But supper has been ready for you．Besides，please feed the bird after supper for me whose food is in the box below the cage．【高分句型二】What's more，our neighbor，aunt zhang，invite you to have a walk after supper．You could call her back to appoint the time and place you will meet．（交代晚餐，喂鸟以及赵阿姨的邀请）
There is no point worrying about my safety，because the community he lives in is next to ours．And I promise to come back before 9 o'clock．And my homework today has been finished．（做出保证，让妈妈放心）
                                                                                                                                                                                                         Love，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                    Lihua．

点评 考查提纲类作文．
提纲类作文的要点比较多，所以在写作时注意不要漏掉要点，因为这些要点是阅卷老师关注的重点．