书面表达假如你是李华.家住江苏南京上海路80号.1999年暑假参加了全国中学生英语夏令营.请根据所给要点.用英语给加拿大的笔友Thomas写一封信.谈谈夏令营的情况和你的感受.写信日期:2000年8月10日. 注意:(1) 信须包括表格提供的内容要点.可以适当增减细节.使信意思连贯: (2) 词数:100左右, (3) 信的开头已写在下面.不计入总词数. 生� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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　　假如你是李华，家住江苏南京上海路80号，1999年暑假参加了全国中学生英语夏令营.请根据所给要点，用英语给加拿大的笔友Thomas写一封信，谈谈夏令营的情况和你的感受.写信日期：2000年8月10日.

　　注意：(1) 信须包括表格提供的内容要点，可以适当增减细节，使信意思连贯：

　　　　 (2) 词数：100左右；

　　　　 (3) 信的开头已写在下面，不计入总词数.

生词：全国中学生外语能力竞赛：NEPCS

比赛：competition

交流：exchange

80 Shanghai Road

Nanjing Jiangsu，PRC

Aug．10，1998

Dear Thomas,

　　Nice to hear from you again．__________________________________

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答案：略
解析：

写作思路点拨

(1) 格式：看图表写信

(2) 人称：第一人称，第三人称

(3) 时态：一般过去时

(4) 短语：hear from收到……来信；summer vacation暑假；at the end of在……末；summer camp夏令营；English speech competition英语讲演比赛；places of interest名胜；all the time一直，始终；make friends with与……交朋友；have great fun玩得很开心.

(5) 要点

① 营址：烟台市

② 活动日期：七月底，四天

③ 参加人员：全国中学生外语竞赛获胜者，中国、美国、英国和澳大利亚英语教师

④ 活动内容：举行英语讲演比赛；观看学生表演，游览名胜；交流英语学习经验

⑤ 感受：提高了英语口语能力；交了许多朋友；玩得很开心

(6) 草拟要点成英语

① summer camp to be held in Yantai

② time of the summer camp: four days, at the end of July

③ winners of NEPCS to go to a four-day summer camp, some English teachers from China, the USA, England and Australia to join us

④ to have an English speech competition, to watch wonderful performances given by the students in Yantai, to visit some places of interest, to exchange our learning English experience

⑤ to have improved our spoken English, to have made many friends, to have great fun in the camp

(7) 扩展要点成句

① A summer camp was held in Yantai.

② Time was four days, at the end of July.

③ The winners of NEPCS went to the summer camp. Some English teachers from China, the USA, England and Australia joined us.

④ We had an English speech competition, watched wonderful performances given by the students in Yantai and visited some places of interest. We exchanged our English learning experience.

⑤We have improved-our spoken English and made many new friends. We had great fun in the camp.

(8) 适当调整句型，尽可能多地使用语法结构和词汇，合理使用语句间的连接成分，谋篇组句成文.

80 Shanghai Road

Nanjing, Jiangsu, PRC

Aug. 10, 2000

　　Dear Thomas,

　　Nice to hear from you again. This summer vacation, at the end of July, we winners of NEPCS went to a four-day summer camp held in Yantai. Some English teachers from China, the USA, England and Australia joined us. We had an English speech competition, watched wonderful performances given by the students in Yantai and visited some places of interest. Besides, we exchanged our English learning experience. All the time English was spoken. Thus our spoken English has greatly improved and I have made many new friends, we really had great fun in the camp.

　　With best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

(9) 语言运用提示

　　Nice to hear from you.是 It's nice to hear from you.的省略；a four-day summer camp held in Yantai中, four-day是复合形容词作定语, held in Yantai是过示分词短语作后置定语，都是修饰summer camp.

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