Question

11．暑假即将来临．你们班同学讨论了假期计划，提出了不同的看法．请根据提示写一篇有关讨论的英语短文，并谈谈你的看法．
优点缺点
待在家里花费少，舒适方便不能亲身了解外面的世界
外出旅游增长见识，开阔眼见花费多，旅途不方便
注意：
1．词数：100左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文 连贯．
3．参考词汇：增长见识  increase their knowledge
开阔眼见broaden one's horizons．
The summer holiday is coming．Our class have had a discussion about what to do during the holiday．Some are in favor of staying at home．They think it's both convenient and comfortable．What's more，they can save money for other purposes．But they will lose the chances of getting to know the outside world．
However，others prefer to go out for traveling since it can increase their knowledge and broaden their horizons．But they will spend more money and meet some difficulties while traveling．
In my opinion，it would be much better to stay at home，for I can do what I like，such as reading books，watching TV，and helping my parents with the housework．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇有关讨论假期计划的英语短文．根据题目要求可知用第一人称和一般将来时．内容包括：一点明文章主题；二待在家里的优缺点；三外出旅游的优缺点；四自己的观点．
高分句型：
1．However，others prefer to go out for traveling since it can increase their knowledge and broaden their horizons．句子里prefer to 表示"更喜欢做某事"； since 引导原因状语从句，表示"因为"．
但是，其他人更喜欢外出旅行，因为这可以增长他们的见识，开阔他们的眼界．
2．In my opinion，it would be much better to stay at home，for I can do what I like，such as reading books，watching TV，and helping my parents with the housework．句子里In my opinion表示"依我看来"；for 引导原因状语从句，表示"因为"； what I like是宾语从句，表示"我喜欢的事"．
依我看来，待在家里更好，因为我可以做我喜欢的事，例如读书，看电视，帮助父母做家务．

解答 The summer holiday is coming．Our class have had a discussion about what to do during the holiday（点明文章主题）
     Some are in favor of staying at home．They think it's both convenient and comfortable．What's more，they can save money for other purposes．But they will lose the chances of getting to know the outside world．
（待在家里的优缺点）     
    However，others prefer to go out for traveling since it can increase their knowledge and broaden their horizons．【高分句型一】But they will spend more money and meet some difficulties while traveling．（外出旅游的优缺点）
     In my opinion，it would be much better to stay at home，for I can do what I like，such as reading books，watching TV，and helping my parents with the housework．【高分句型二】（自己的观点）

点评 考查提纲类作文．写作的步骤：
第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达．
第二步：拟定提纲，创造良好的开端；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾．
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇（注意"参考词汇"的提示作用）．