Question

【题目】高三第一次考试成绩单

科目	语文	数学	英语	理综
满分	150	150	150	300
李强	101	143	95	279

假设你是李华，以上是你的朋友李强上次考试成绩单。请根据其成绩单给他写一封回信。信的开头与结尾已经给出。内容要求：

1. 简单叙述他的学习情况；

2. 对于今后复习备考，提出你的建议和意见。

3. 字数约120词。

参考词汇：成绩单examination result list; 理综science subjects;

Dear Li Qiang,

Your letter reached me yesterday. It can be seen obviously from the above examination result list

Yours truly,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Li Qiang,

Your letter reached me yesterday. It can be seen obviously from the above examination result list that you are excellent at maths and science subjects while your Chinese and English are comparatively weak.

Your maths and science subjects are already good enough, so your aim should be keeping them at present level, making sure they will not drop. It is not worthwhile spending too much time on these subjects.

As for English and Chinese, You must try your best to find out why the marks always stay so low, and then you had better go to the teachers and classmates for advice, so that you can take effective measures to improve your English and Chinese.

There are several months left for you to prepare for the university entrance examinations. I hope you can keep balance all of the subjects and keep up spirits, and at the meantime balance between study and rest. Only in this way can you enter an ideal university.

Wish you success!

Yours truly,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本篇书面表达属于书信类，根据提示信息来给李强写一封回信。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑递进关系来写。本文写作时可以按照他学习的情况和以后的具体规划进行介绍。根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时。 4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如固定结构you had better go to the teachers and classmates for advice,倒装句Only in this way can you enter an ideal university，被动语态It can be seen obviously from the above examination result list that you are excellent at maths and science subjects while your Chinese and English are comparatively weak.句型it is worthwhile ，It is not worthwhile spending too much time on these subjects。此外，文章还使用了大量短语keeping them at present level、try your best to find out、keep balance all of the subjects and keep up spirits、take effective measures等，使语言更加连贯。