Question

假设你是新华中学的高三学生李华，你校打算邀请阿里巴巴首席执行官马云来学校做一次毕业典礼演讲，请你给马首席写一封邀请信。内容包括：

1.说明写信的目的；

2.说明演讲的具体安排-----时间：5月30日；地点：学校操场;

主题：怎样通过个人奋斗实现人生理想；

3.表达感谢与祝福。

注意：1.词数100左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.参考词汇：毕业典礼演讲 commencement speech

Dear Mayun, CEO of Ali Baba,

My name is Li Hua. I’m a Senior 3 student from Xinhua Middle School.

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Mayun, CEO of Ali Baba,

My name is Li Hua. I’m a Senior 3 student from Xinhua Middle School. I am writing to ask you a favor. Would you please come to our school and give us a commencement speech? The speech is scheduled to be given on May 30th on the school playground ,the theme of which will be how to realize our dreams through personal efforts. We are eager to hear you talk about your own experiences and unique views.

I sincerely hope you can take time out of your busy schedule, and I would appreciate it very much if you could come. Thank you in advance and wish you all the best!

I am looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

这是一篇典型的书信类应用文写作。考生在写作时要注意目的明确、条理清楚。英文书信一般由以下六部分组成：信头、信内地址、称呼、正文、结尾、签名。题目已给定大致的格式，另外还要注意结合主题。

本文开篇就用了一个好的短语ask you a favor，请您帮个忙，避免了使用常用词help；第三句的祈使句Would you please显得谦和有礼；第四句中使用了定语从句the theme of which will be how to realize our dreams through personal efforts，which代替the speech，使得句式非常灵活多变，不会显得千篇一律；第五句中短语be eager to的使用也非常恰当；第六句I would appreciate it if you could come，虚拟语气用在这里表示礼貌，客气；第七句中的in advance（提前）也用的非常好。最后一段使用了look forward to（期待）和at your earliest convenience（在您方便时）显示了较好的英语功底，使得整个书信格式完整而礼貌。

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