Question

【题目】Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese

学校计划明年暑假对学生宿舍进行改造，校长就设计方案征求学生的意见。假设你是 李华，给校长写一封信，对设计方案提出一些速议。你的信必须包括以下内容:

1.谈谈你规划的内容;

2.并说明你的规划理由(从有利于学生的学习、活动、休息等角度进行说明)。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mr. Headmaster,

I’m very excited to hear that our student dormitories will be transformed in summer holiday next year.

On behalf of us students, I prefer to bring forward several opinions about dormitory transformation. First, the duty room must be located at the gate of the first floor in order to make sure the security of students. Second, the dormitories of students in Grade 3 should be arranged on the higher floors so that they can get involved in a relatively quiet environment to study for their credit points or college entrance examination. Last but not the least, that they may pour into the public toilet at the same time can lead to a certain push or squeeze, so it couldn’t be better if there could be washrooms in each dorm.

I will appreciate it if my advice could be accepted and I’m extremely expecting a new look of our dormitory.

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】

本文是一篇应用文。学校计划明年暑假对学生宿舍进行改造，李华就设计方案提出个人意见，写一封信给校长。

第一步：根据提示可知，学校计划明年暑假对学生宿舍进行改造，李华就设计方案提出个人意见，写一封信给校长。

第二步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：students, bring forward, be located, pour into等。

第三步：确定文章结构，本文可以采取三段的写法，第一段主要提出得知宿舍改造的消息之后非常高兴；第二段提出个人的意见并给出原因；第三段提出期盼。

第四步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要用一般现在时。

第五步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。