Question

【题目】书面表达

假设你是中学生李华，你买了一本英文词典，收到后发现一些质量问题，请给书店经理用英语写一封电子邮件，说明情况和自己的要求。要点如下：

1．购买的细节；

2．发现的问题；

3．阐述你的要求（退款或换货）。

注意：1．词数100左右；

2．信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

3．参考词汇：印刷错误 misprint (n.)

Dear Manager,

I’m writing to tell you something that happened to me. _______________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Manager,

I’m writing to tell you something that happened to me.

Last week I bought an English dictionary from your online bookstore because I am in great need of such a dictionary to help me with my English study. It costs me 25 dollars. But unfortunately when it reached me, I found it very unsatisfactory. There are quite a few misprints and some of the pages are even missing!

As far as I am concerned, I’d like my money back or at least you can change this dictionary for another copy! Personally you should have checked the dictionary to make sure that the dictionary is of high quality before you delivered to customers. I do hope your service can improve from now on.

I’m looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本文是一篇应用文，要求写一封电子邮件，邮件的格式已经给出，所以无需注意格式问题。学生在写作时要注意从提纲所给出的三方面要求着手，因为提示信息较少，所以要充分发挥想象，增加适当的细节以使行文连贯，充实内容。在写作时尽量使用恰当的连接词，插入语以使文章层次分明，使用多种句式结构和高级词汇亮点来提高文章的档次，如定语从句，宾语从句和状语从句等。此外，因为买字典是发生在过去的事情，所以在描述这件事的时候要用一般过去时。