Question

18．假定你是李华．你的英国朋友Karl暑期将来你所在的城市学习汉语，他来信向你征求课外运动的建议．请你根据以下要点写一封回信．
1．建议运动方式；
2．说明理由；
3．表达祝愿．
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头结尾已给出，但不计入总词数．
Dear Karl，
I'm delighted to know you will come to China to study Chinese this summer．
          ．
Yours，
Lihua．

Answer 1

分析 本文为书信类作文，要求写一封建议信，就英国朋友Karl暑期将来你所在的城市学习汉语给出课外运动的建议，虽然要点已经给出，但是需要进行适当的扩展，写作内容包括：建议运动的方式；理由；向他表达祝愿．注意使用连接词，使作文连贯，注意使用一般现在时和将来时，人称主要用第一人称．

重要短语：delighted to高兴
come to 来到，study Chinese学习中文
as for至于
after school放学后
share with sb和某人分享
easily accessible方便
In addition此外
stay in待在
Best wishes 最美好的祝福

高分句型：
1．No matter which you choose，making sure of your safety is the first thing．
whichever 既可以引导名词性从句也可以引导让步状语从句，引导让步状语从句时可以转换成no matter which．no matter which 只可以引导让步状语从句．
例如：
Either Friday or Monday---choose whichever day is best for you．（名词性从句）
Whichever party gets in at the next election，the economy is going to be in a mess．
=No matter which party gets in at the next election，the economy is going to be in a mess（让步状语从句）

2．Swimming in the river or swimming pools is strongly recommended partly because it is hot in summer here
动名词短语做主语，如：Collecting information about children's health is his job．收集有关儿童健康的信息是他的工作．

3．If you have any other problems，please contact me without hesitation．
if 引导条件状语从句表示某事很可能发生，条件是可能存在的，主句中某种情况发生的概率也是很高的．
如：If you ask him，he will help you．如果你请他帮忙，他会帮你的．

解答 Dear Karl，
    I'm delighted to know you will come to China to study Chinese this summer． As for taking exercise after school，here I have some suggestions to share with you．（欢迎Karl的到来）
   Swimming in the river or swimming pools is strongly recommended partly because it is hot in summer here，（高分句型） and partly because the places for swimming are easily accessible．In addition，climbing is extremely good for your health and time can be scheduled flexibly．So climbing mountains is also not a bad choice．No matter which you choose，making sure of your safety is the first thing．（高分句型）（给出建议并说明理由）
   If you have any other problems，please contact me without hesitation．（高分句型） I believe you will have a good time during the stay in China．Best wishes!（表达自己的祝愿）
Yours，
Li hua

点评 这是一篇书信类作文，我们要做的就是把这些内容用正确的英语表达出来，动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，同时要表达出自己的观点，可适当的发挥，在写作时要注意时态，人称，固定词组搭配，要注意语言的规范性，做到上下文联系紧密，条理清楚，符合逻辑关系．