Question

书面表达（25分）
近年来，大城市的交通拥堵引发公众抱怨和关心，它给居民的生活和工作带来极大不便。请根据以下信息以“Traffic Congestion”为题写一篇英文报道。首句已给出，120字左右。

原因	措施	自己的看法
私家车增多 城市道路和街道窄，改善缓慢 公共交通体系管理不善，个别人不遵守交通规则	改善公交体系，行人遵守交规不闯红灯	………

Traffic congestion has long been a problem of great concern and complaint in big cities. It has caused a lot of inconvenience to people’s life and work.
                                                                                 
                                                                                
                                                                                
                                                                                
                                                                                
                                                                                
                                                                                
                                                                          

Answer 1

不唯一
Traffic Congestion
Traffic congestion has long been a problem of great concern and complaint in big cities. It has caused a lot of inconvenience to people’s life and work.
There are many causes for this problem. The first cause is the great increase in the number of private cars, blocking the way of other public transportation vehicles. The second cause is the slow and inefficient construction and improvement of the roads and streets. With a large population and numbers of automobiles increasing, some roads still remain unimproved, which will surely lead to problems. The last cause is the insufficient management of the public traffic system and the people＇s lack of awareness of traffic regulations. To solve these , we should not only improve public traffic system but also help people with their safety awareness and not to cross the road when lights are still against them
In my opinion , only in this way can we have a comfortable road environment in cities.

解析试题分析：先读提示，要点与格式要弄清；时态语态要当心，前后呼应要一致，结构搭配莫违背；文章写好细检查，点滴小错别忽视。学生在明确目的和掌握要领后，要严格按照规定的时间去完成作文训练任务。最后要检查（1）要点是否齐全，有无遗漏。（2）内容是否连贯，有无缺词。（3）语法是否正确，人称、时态、语态、名词单复数等有无错误。（4）用词是否得当，有无习语及固定搭配等方面的错误。
考点：提纲作文。
点评：要选用恰当的语言合理组织文章结构，内容统一、连贯，语法、拼写、标点正确，用词恰当。为了避免太多单词拼写错误，语法错误，不要为了追求词语的华丽而堆积一些自己也没把握的单词，不要刻意追求长句而写一些自己不知对错的有多个从句组成的长句。考试时最好选择自己最有把握的词汇，短语，句式。