Question

【题目】假设你是高二学生李华，看到很多同学因为学习而忽略了体育锻炼，打算给学校英语报社投稿，鼓励同学们加强体育锻炼，注重身体健康。请按照以下要点，以“Health and Sports”为题写一篇英语短文。

写作要点：

1.身体健康的重要性；

2.运动对大家的好处：

3.你的建议。

注意：

1.词数100左右。

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】Health and Sports

Good health is very important to everyone.A healthy person can always be energetic and enjoy his life.A person who is in poor health cannot work well.

When it comes to keeping healthy,playing sports enjoys widespread popularity among people.As high school students,we must study hard and take many important exams,which may make many students feel nervous.So it's necessary to take exercise regularly to help release stress.Physical exercise can help make muscles strong.What's more,while playing,we get relaxed,which can help us study more efficiently.

【解析】试题分析：本文是一篇以Ｈｅａｌｔｈ　ａｎｄ　Ｓｐｏｒｔｓ为题的英语短文，属于提纲式作文，写作要求１.身体健康的重要性；２.运动对大家的好处；３.本人的建议。根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来。写作时注意时态、语态的合理运用，主次分明，详略得当，语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。特别注意本文一定要有自己的建议。

【亮点说明】

本文是一篇提纲式作文，内容齐全，结构布局合理，句中使用高级句子。A person who is in poor health cannot work well.ｗｈｏ引导定语从句；When it comes to keeping healthy,playing sports enjoys widespread popularity among people固定句式When it comes to―――，使用巧妙；it's necessary to take exercise regularly to help release stress动词不定式做真正的主语；while playing,we get relaxed,which can help us study more efficiently.现在分词做状语，同时使用ｗｈｉｃｈ引导的非限制性定语从句；另外，So，What's more,的运用为文章增色添彩。