Question

第二节：写作（满分30分）

随着全球环境的恶化，越来越多的人选择过“低碳生活（low-carbon life）”，即减少二氧化碳的排放，低能量、低消耗、低开支的生活。请写一篇英文倡议书，倡议你的同学们加入“低碳一族”，为环保做出贡献。提示要点如下：

1.用手洗衣服；

2.多走楼梯，少用电梯；

3.去超市自备购物袋；

4.步行或者骑自行车上学；

5…….

注意：

1.词数：120-150左右。

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

With the global warming getting worse, more people choose to live a low-carbon life for the purpose of reducing greenhouse gases. As students, we have the responsibility to change our lifestyle to fit the world better. The following are some small things that may lead to big improvement of the environment.

Firstly, wash your clothes by hand instead of using washing machines. Secondly, don't take elevators unless it is necessary, using stairs does good to both your health and the environment. Thirdly, remember to bring your own shopping bags when you go to the supermarket. Lastly, go to school on foot or by bicycle. Buses produce carbon, too.

Let's take action and be low-carbon people!

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇倡议书，内容具有时代性，生活性和可写性。要求学生根据现在的情况，倡议同学们加入低碳一族。作文要包含所有中文提示，可根据主题适当发挥。该文章审题容易，学生切入容易，但要取得高分，需要有正确的句子才能明了清晰的表达作者的意思。考生应明白高考书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求的是将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确地表达意思的能力。考生应该用自己最熟悉、最有把握的词、短语及句式，按一定的逻辑顺序和意义层次完成短文，划分好文章的自然段落，注意段落之间的发展和连贯。尽量使用不同长度的句子，使句型多样化。适当使用连词，使句子间的衔接自然流畅。

【亮点说明】With the global warming getting worse, more people choose to live a low-carbon life for the purpose of reducing greenhouse gases. 这句话是with复合结构， The following are some small things that may lead to big improvement of the environment.这句话有定语从句，don't take elevators unless it is necessary, using stairs does good to both your health and the environment.这句话有unless引导的条件状语从句，和非谓语动词做状语，还有这篇文章关联词也比较多，如 Firstly, Secondly, Thirdly, 和Lastly,这样文章读起来就通顺的多了。

考点：考查提纲类书面表达