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第四部分：书面表达（25分）
你是在校大学生李华，暑假前夕有一天在学校的告示板上看到下面一则寻找家教的广告，你打算按要求写一封信去应聘并留下自己的联络电话:88866907
WANTED:TUTOR FOR TWO SENIOR3 BOYS
Requirement:
Good communicational skills
Good at all Senior High subjects
Freshman and above（大学一年级以上）
Enjoy sharing experience with others
Work time: 9:00, Mon. Fri. July 10 to Aug 10
Payment: 100 yuan per hour
Mr Allen Lee
写作内容应包括以下要点:
1. 说明自己有资格担任此家庭教师，是学校的优秀学生，各科成绩优秀
2. 有充分系统的备考资料，深刻的备考高考体会乐意与他人分享
3. 自己在校时积极参与各项活动，善于与他人相处
参考词汇：
优秀学生one of the top ten students
高考备考资料materials for the preparation of the College Entrance Examination
注意：
可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；2．词数120左右；
3．信的开头和结尾已给出，但不计入词数中
Dear Mr. Allen Lee,
I am writing to ask for the tutor job for the two Senior 3 boys.
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I look forward to your reply at 88866907
Yours sincerely,
Li Hu

Answer 1

Possible versions:
Dear Mr Allen Lee,
I am writing to ask for the tutor job for the two Senior 3 boys.
As a college student, I’m sure that I have all the right qualification needed for the job.
Firstly, I am proud to say that I am one of the top ten students in my grade, and perform well in all my academic subjects. Besides, I have  collected plenty of important materials for the preparation of the College Entrance Examination, which contain all the necessary knowledge we need to review  in a systematic way. I am very glad to share these materials as well as my experience in preparing and taking the College Entrance Examination with others. Lastly, I take an active part in various activities in and outside my school and have been able to keep a really good  relationship with those around me; thus, I do think I am the very person you are looking  for. I look forward to your reply at 88866907.
Your sincerely
Li Hua

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