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注意:词数为100左右。

Dear editor,
Now, more and more students are getting fond of western fast food, and thus they take in too much sugar and fat. I don’t think it good for their health.
There are all kinds of foods in the world. Which one is healthier, the Chinese food or the western fast food? Different people have different choices.
In my opinion, the Chinese food is healthier. Firstly, the Chinese food contains a lot of fruit and green vegetables. It is rich in fiber and low in sugar and fat. Secondly, the Chinese food is very delicious and has many dishes. It is nice to taste. I think it is the healthiest in the world. So many Chinese people can keep fit and have white teeth.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

试题分析:考查应用文中的书信的写作。请你给21世纪报社写信,反映你对当今学生饮食的看法,要点都已经给出,书信类短文的关键在于要点要全面包括,不能有遗漏和省略。但是要点只是提纲,考生还要在此基础上增加细节,不要逐字逐句翻译,同时注意谋篇布局的顺序,运用合适的连接词连接全文,同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。审题时注意本文使用一般现在时,描述要尽量选择简洁的语言,运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。难点在于选择词汇和句型,可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。还要用适当的连接词被句子连接起来,这样文章显得更连贯。
【亮点说明】文章中表达的时候使用了词组和句型:get fond of 喜欢,take in 摄入, keep fit 保持健康。I don’t think it good for their health.这句话用了否定前移和it做形式宾语, In my opinion, 在我看来,be rich in富含…,It is nice to taste.这句话用了it做形式主语,也适当使用了关联词:Firstly, Secondly,
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