Question

19．假如你叫李华，你的美国笔友Tom来信询问你十一假期过的怎样．请根据表格中的信息给他回信，说明你在十一假期中的活动和理由．

活动	理由
休息	学习压力大，缺少锻炼和休息
看望乡下的祖父母	帮他们做家务并谈了身边的新鲜事
和朋友短途旅行	欣赏大自然，呼吸新鲜空气

注意：词数100左右．
十一假期  the National Day holiday  学习压力 study burden     缺少 lack of    乡下 countryside    家务活 housework     短途旅行 trip    欣赏 appreciate    呼吸 breathe．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于图表类作文，根据提示信息你的美国笔友Tom来信询问你十一假期过的怎样．请根据表格中的信息给他回信，说明你在十一假期中的活动和理由，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：分别从计划和理由两个方面来讨论该话题 2、图表是文章的总体框架，要在图表的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：First首先；as a result of由于…的原因；do some housework 做家务；as well as 也，和；What's more而且；look forward to盼望；
First，I had a good rest because recently I often felt tired as a result of my heavy study burden as well as lack of sleep and physical exercise．（高分句型一）
Of course，it took me two days to stay with my grandparents living in the countryside and helped them do some housework and told them what had happened to me and my friends．（高分句型二）

解答 Dear Tom，
       I'm very glad to receive your letter．And it's a pleasure to tell you something about how I spent the National Day holiday．
       First，I had a good rest because recently I often felt tired as a result of my heavy study burden as well as lack of sleep and physical exercise．（高分句型一）Of course，it took me two days to stay with my grandparents living in the countryside and helped them do some housework and told them what had happened to me and my friends．（高分句型二）What's more，I made a trip with my friends to appreciate the beauty of nature and breathed fresh air．What did you do in your summer holidays？
      I'm looking forward to hearing from you．
      Best wishes!
                                                                                                                                                                                                        Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                       Li Hua．

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．