Question

17．假设你是李华，昨天收到好友李明的来信，得知他要到一所新的学校就读，他在兴奋的同时又担心很难适应新的学校生活，请你根据以下信息给他写一封回信：
1．要友好对待每个人；  2．认识新的老师；
3．和新同学交朋友；   4．加入几个俱乐部，多与同学一起参加活动．
注意：
1．可根据内容需要适当拓展，以使行文连贯；  2．词数100左右．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息昨天收到好友李明的来信，得知他要到一所新的学校就读，他在兴奋的同时又担心很难适应新的学校生活，请你根据以下信息给他写一封回信，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：要友好对待每个人；  认识新的老师；和新同学交朋友；  加入几个俱乐部，多与同学一起参加活动． 2、图表是文章的总体框架，要在图表的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：fit in融入；First of all首先；Secondly其次；Thirdly第三；Last but not least最后同样最重要；
Now I'd like to give you my advice on how to fit in well at a new school．（高分句型一）
First of all，you should be nice to everyone，because they'll most likely be your next friends and teachers．（高分句型二）
Secondly，try to get to know your teachers，talking to them and finding out more about them．（高分句型三）
I'm convinced that you can fit in soon．（高分句型四）

解答 Dear Li Ming，
      I'm glad to learn that you're moving to a new school．Now I'd like to give you my advice on how to fit in well at a new school．（高分句型一）
      First of all，you should be nice to everyone，because they'll most likely be your next friends and teachers．（高分句型二）Secondly，try to get to know your teachers，talking to them and finding out more about them．（高分句型三）Thirdly，making friends is a better way．Don't lie，and be yourself．Last but not least，I suggest you join a few clubs or sports．Why not spend more time taking part in some activities with your new schoolmates？
      I hope that my suggestions can work．I'm convinced that you can fit in soon．（高分句型四）
                                                                                                                                                                                                                        Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                        Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．