Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

I am a high school student. A few days before one of my very good friend told me that he was going to stop school. He said that he wanted to start his own’s business. I tried my best to get him to change his mind and failed. I realized it was difficult of me to change his mind. He is not doing so good in his studied. The process are more important than the result. Now there are only 90 days being left before the test. I am not sure that his decision is right or wrong. I needed your advice.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 before改为ago

 friend改为friends

 own’s 改为own

 and改为but

 of改为for

 good 改为well

 are改为is

 去掉being

 that改成whether

 needed改成need

【解析】

试题分析：

 before改为ago，a few days ago和过去时连用

 one of后面用名词复数 friend改为friends

 own就是形容词，不需要加‘s

 句意：我尽力想说服他放弃这个想法，但失败了。and改为but

 句型：It is +adj +for/of sb to do…,如果adj是修饰事情，用for，如果adj是修饰人，用of，这题difficult是修饰事情，用for

 副词well修饰doing，good 改为well

 主语是the process，谓语是单数。are改为is

 left是过去分词做定语，不用进行式

 I am not sure 后面接whether引导宾语从句

 这句话是一般现在时needed改成need

考点：考查短文改错

点评：短文改错考查考生在文章中运用语法的能力，要特别注意单复数和时态。还有冠词，形容词，副词的用法。