精英家教网 > 高中英语 > 题目详情
17.今天是父亲节.假定你是李,请给你的美国朋友John写一封电子邮件,谈谈你将如何与父亲一起度过这个特别的日子.要点如下:
●表述你与父亲间的情感.
●为父亲制作二张卡片.
●帮助父亲做点事.
●陪父亲散步等.
注意:1.词数100词左右.
2.请不要逐句翻译,可适当发挥;
3..邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数.
Dear John,
It's Father's Day today.It's a special day,isn't it?
I think we should do something to show our love for our fathers on this special day.My father and I are good friends.Whenever I meet with difficulties,he is always there,ready to help me.(高分句型一)
Today I will make two beautiful cards for him,with my thanks and best wishes on them.Then I will help him wash the car this afternoon and cook his favorite food in the evening.(高分句型二)Besides,I'll take a walk with him after dinner and then play chess with him,for he likes it very much.(高分句型三)I'm sure he'll be very happy.
What'your plan for Father's Day?I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours
Li Hua.

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文,根据提示信息今天是父亲节.假定你是李,请给你的美国朋友John写一封电子邮件,谈谈你将如何与父亲一起度过这个特别的日子,写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,要点包括:●表述你与父亲间的情感.●为父亲制作二张卡片.●帮助父亲做点事.●陪父亲散步等.2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象.要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写.本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写.3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态.4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点.
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种表达:meet with遇到;Besides另外;play chess 下棋;look forward to盼望;hear from收到…的信息;
Whenever I meet with difficulties,he is always there,ready to help me.(高分句型一)
Then I will help him wash the car this afternoon and cook his favorite food in the evening.(高分句型二)
Besides,I'll take a walk with him after dinner and then play chess with him,for he likes it very much.(高分句型三)

解答 Dear John,
       It's Father's Day today.It's a special day,isn't it?
       I think we should do something to show our love for our fathers on this special day.My father and I are good friends.Whenever I meet with difficulties,he is always there,ready to help me.(高分句型一)
       Today I will make two beautiful cards for him,with my thanks and best wishes on them.Then I will help him wash the car this afternoon and cook his favorite food in the evening.(高分句型二)Besides,I'll take a walk with him after dinner and then play chess with him,for he likes it very much.(高分句型三)I'm sure he'll be very happy.
      What's your plan for Father's Day?I'm looking forward to hearing from yon.
                                                                             Yours,
                                                                             Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.

练习册系列答案
相关习题

科目:高中英语 来源: 题型:阅读理解

7.A record warm December raised average temperatures enough to make 2015 the second hottest year on record in the contiguous United States,according to the National Oceanic and Atmospheric Administration's National Climate Monitoring Annual Report,which was released Thursday.
The United Nations had previously reported that 2015 was shaping up to be the warmest year on record for the whole planet.
Last year was also the third wettest on record in the U.S.and saw ten weather-or climate-related disasters that each caused at least $1 billion in damage in the U.S.and killed a total of 155 people.These include a drought,two floods,five severe storms,a wildfire,and a winter storm.
The average U.S.temperature was 54.4°F,2.4°F above the 20th century average,and second only to 2012's record warmth.This was also the 19th consecutive year with average temperatures above the average for the century.Every state reported above-average annual temperatures.The warming was particularly pronounced across most of the eastern half of the country in December,when many places saw temperatures 30 degrees above normal and many records were set.
This mirrored changes seen in the Arctic that month,when temperatures spiked to 50 degrees above normal.Part of this warming was driven by a strong El Ni?o,or periodic warming in the Pacific Ocean,but some of it can also be attributed to global warming,says meteorologist Eric Holthaus,who was not involved with the federal report.
The analysis comes less than a month after the U.S.and 194 other countries signed an agreement in Paris to more aggressively counter the effects of climate change.
"Even if all the initial targets in Paris are met,we'll only be part of the way there when it comes to reducing carbon from the atmosphere,"said President Barack Obama at the time.Still,the agreement represented"a turning point"by setting up"the architecture"for doing so,he said.
NOAA's climate monitoring center doesn't issue predictions for future weather,but the agency's Climate Prediction Center does.That team's forecast for the next three months calls for warmer-than-average temperatures in much of the country,although parts of Texas and the Southeast may be a little cooler than usual.
As Lancaster University Professor Gail Whiteman told the Weather Channel,"climate change means extreme weather is the new normal."

28.What's the meaning of the underlined sentence"climate change means extreme weather is the new normal"?D
A.Extreme weather will not normal due to the climate change.
B.Climate change will result in the unpredictable weather.
C.Climate change will be more and more common except for the extreme weather.
D.Extreme weather will be kind of tendency in the future.
29.Which of the following statement is true?D
A.The target of reducing carbon is accomplished.
B.$1 billion loss was caused by the extreme weather.
C.In most areas of US,the temperatures will be warmer than average.
D.2015 was the first warmest and the third wettest on record in the country.
30.What can be inferred from the text?A
A.The reducing of carbon still needs great efforts worldwide.
B.NOAA has nothing to do with the predictions for climate change.
C.The whole US will be warmer in the future due to the global warming.
D.The weather change in the western areas is more obvious than that in the east.
31.We can probably find the text in?B
A.a government report
B.a science magazine
C.an advertisement
D.a newspaper.

查看答案和解析>>

科目:高中英语 来源: 题型:词汇应用

8.The Science Museum,whichwe visited during a recent trip to Britain,is one of London's tourist attractions.

查看答案和解析>>

科目:高中英语 来源: 题型:短文改错

5.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
I'm very glad to have the chance to run after the president of the student union.I am student in Grade Three.Since I come to the high school,I have always been the monitor of my class.I have done a very good job for my classmate and my teachers give me good praise.I'm good in communication and organizing but always ready to help others.Moreover,I have some hobbies and I'm sure that I am well to fit for this position.If I became president,I'll try my best to make the union attractive by organizing differently activities.I'll do many things for you to meet my demands as well.I hope you will give me a chance.

查看答案和解析>>

科目:高中英语 来源: 题型:书面表达

12.假设你是李华,与朋友Bob约好要在星期日一起去游泳,但是因故不能赴约.请你给他写封信,内容包括:
1.对不能赴约表示歉意;
2.说明不能赴约的原因(原因自拟);
3.另约时间及碰头地点去游泳.(时间及碰头地点自拟)
注意:1.词数100左右.  2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.
Dear Bob,
To tell the truth,it's really exciting to go swimming with you on Sunday afternoon but I'm afraid that I can't keep my promise.(高分句型一)Now I'm writing to apologize to you for what I will do.
I have just received a phone call from my cousin saying that she will come to visit me this Sunday.Due to the fact that she is not familiar with my hometown,I have to meet her at the train station in the afternoon.(高分句型二)Therefore,I can't spare time to go swimming with you.As for this.I'm terribly sorry and I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.
I wonder if you are free next Sunday afternoon.If so,we can go early so that we'll have time to see a film together after swimming.We can meet at the school gate at 2 o'clock.If it's OK for you,please let me know ahead of time or you can suggest another time.(高分句型三)
Yours,
Li Hua.

查看答案和解析>>

科目:高中英语 来源: 题型:书面表达

2.假如你叫李华,六一儿童节就要到了,你所在的学校将要组织学生老师代表去慰问当地一家孤儿院( orphanage ).请你给外教Tina 写封信,邀请她参加.要点如下:
1.提出邀请;
2.活动的意义;
3.介绍活动的时间及几项活动安排;
4.期待她的加入.
注意:1.字数 120左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文流畅;3.开头和结尾已给出.
Dear Tina,
I'd like to invite you tojoin us for a visit to a local orphanage next Sunday for Children's Day.Here are some details about the activity.
The reason why our school will organize such an activity is that we should show our concerns and love to children,especially these disabled children.(高分句型一)At the same time,giving is receiving.
We will leave school by bus at 9:00 a.m.and return at 4:00 p.m.We will donate books and toys to children.We will spend fun time together singing,dancing,and playing games,which may help them feel happy from the heart.(高分句型二)You are a popular and easy-going teacher in our school.Therefore,your presence will definitely cheer the children up.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely
Li Hua.

查看答案和解析>>

科目:高中英语 来源: 题型:填空题

9.Christmas is the biggest holiday in the UK,but there's another contender (竞争者) that comes a close second,that is,Easter.
Easter is considered the most important and oldest festival in Christianity.While Christmas Day always (61)falls(fall) on Dec.25,Easter Sunday can happen any time between March 22 (62)andApril 25.This year,the big day will be April 16.
Easter was (63)traditionally(tradition) a religious holiday where Christians would celebrate their
(64)belief(believe) of the resurrection (复活) of Jesus Christ.This still happens,but over the years it (65)has grown(grow) to be defined(界定;给…下定义) by different things.
To many,Easter is a time (66)for relaxation.People usually decorate eggs and enjoy a big meal of roast lamb at home with family.A rabbit (67)carrying(carry) a basket filled with chocolate eggs is a traditional symbol of the holiday.Some families even set up Easter egg hunts (68)wherethey hide eggs in their gardens and get local children to find them.To many young people,Easter no longer has the same traditional,religious meaning.The younger generation,(69)exposed(expose) to the increased commercialism (商业主义) placed on major holidays,is becoming less aware of (70)its(it) meaning and implication(内涵).They just enjoy the day and have fun.

查看答案和解析>>

科目:高中英语 来源: 题型:书面表达

6.假如你是李华,最近你从报纸上看到一家外企公司招聘秘书的广告,请你根据下列要点提示给经理写一封应聘信.
1)今年20岁,即将毕业于职业院校.主修经济管理.
2)学习英语超过八年了,熟悉电脑操作;在过去曾任学生报的编辑,有写作和编辑经验;在校成绩优秀.
3)性格外向,交际能力强.
要求:1)内容要连贯、完整.
2)叙述必须用第一人称.
3)字数:100左右.
参考词汇:职业院校vocational school;主修 major in  经验experience  操作operate
经济管理 business management
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing in response to your advertisement for the position as a secretary in the newspaper.My name is Li Hua and I am twenty years old and I'm going to graduate from a vocational school.(高分句型一)I major in business management.Besides,I've learned English for more than eight years and I am familiar with computer operation.In the last three years,I've been one of the editors of our student newspaper,which makes me experienced in writing and editing.(高分句型二)I do well in my study and my scores are outstanding in my class.I am outing and good at communicating with others.I am sure that I will be qualified for secretary.
I would appreciate it if you could give me the chance to work in your company.(高分句型三)I'm looking forward to your reply.

Yours
Li Hua.

查看答案和解析>>

科目:高中英语 来源: 题型:书面表达

7.某英文报正在就建立良好的师生关系进行讨论.你作为一名中学生,参与了讨论.请你围绕"A good relationship benefits us all"这个话题,根据以下要点,用英语写一篇100-120词的短文.
文章必须包括下列要点:1.建立良好的师生关系的必要性;
2.你认为良好的师生关系应该是怎样的;
3.如何才能建立这种关系.
注意:开头已为你写好,不计入总词数.
A good relationship benefits us allAs a middle school student,I think it necessary to build a good relationship with our teachers,for it is the teachers who show love and concern for us students in study and life and they are good listeners.【高分句型一】We students can always seek support and advice from them,from which we can benefit and learn a lot.【高分句型二】(建立良好的师生关系的必要性)
Therefore an ideal relationship between teachers and students is very important.In my opinion,this relationship should be one filled with love,care,understanding,and respect,so we can exchange ideas freely.(你认为良好的师生关系应该是怎样的)To build a relationship of this kind,teachers should become friends of students while students ought to trust our teachers and express our feeling frankly.Only by joint efforts can we enjoy a friendly relationship between teachers and students.【高分句型三】(如何才能建立这种关系).

查看答案和解析>>

同步练习册答案