Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的一下作文。文中共有10出语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处写一个漏字符号（）, 在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线, 在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last Saturday I went to the library as usually. At about noon, I was enjoying my reading near a lake while suddenly I hear someone crying for help. I went up to see what was happened. I was shocking to find a little child struggling in the water in the distance while many peoples were standing by without doing anything. Without any hesitation, I had pushed through the crowd as I took off my coat, but jumped into the water quickly. I managed to reach him and carried him back to safety. To his great relief, the kid was saved.
I was proud what I had done. I hope everyone can give a hand when someone else is in need.

Answer 1

【小题1】usually→  usual
【小题2】while →when
【小题3】hear→ heard  
【小题4】happened →happening
【小题5】shocking→ shocked 
【小题6】peoples →people
【小题7】pushed 前去掉had
【小题8】but → and
【小题9】his →my
【小题10】proud后加 of

解析试题分析：上周六我和往常一样去图书馆，当我在湖边看书的时候，突然听到喊救命声。我立马跑过去看看发生了什么事情，让人震惊的是我看到一个小孩在水里挣扎，我毫不犹豫得跳进水中，终于把孩子救了上来。
【小题1】usually→  usual 。I went to the library as usually.固定短语 as usual“像往常一样”，所以把usually改为usual。
【小题2】while →when。I was enjoying my reading near a lake while suddenly I hear someone crying for help固定句型 be doing sth ……when“正在做某事这时”，while后不能跟短暂性动词，把while改为when。
【小题3】hear→ heard 。I was enjoying my reading near a lake while suddenly I hear someone crying for help根据语境可知作者叙述过去的事情，故把hear改为heard。
【小题4】happened →happening。 I went up to see what was happened.。happen是不及物动词，没有被动形式，根据语境可知此处表示当时正在发生的事情，故用进行时态，把happened改为happening。
【小题5】shocking→ shocked 。I was shocking to find a little child struggling in the water。shocking意思是“令人震惊的”，指事物的特征，shocked意思是“感到震惊的”指的是人的感受，所以把shocking改为shocked。
【小题6】peoples →people。while many peoples were standing。people当“人们”讲时，没有复数形式，如果当“民族”讲时，可以有复数形式，故把peoples改为people。
【小题7】pushed 前去掉had。I had pushed through the crowd。从事情发生的情况可以判断作者一边推开人群，一边脱外套，表示两个动作同时发生，而不表示动作先后，不用过去完成时态，故把had去掉。
【小题8】but → and。but jumped into the water quickly。由语境可知took off和jumped into是连续发出的动作，没有转折关系，故把but改为and。
【小题9】his →my。To his great relief, the kid was saved. 。根据语境可知看到孩子安然无恙，作者感到如释重负，把his改为my。
【小题10】proud后加 of。I was proud what I had done.。固定短语：be proud of “对……感到骄傲，自豪”，后面跟名词，代词，动名词或what从句，所以在proud 后加of。
考点：考查短文改错。