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VI . 作文：(25分)
假设你是李璐，你所在的城市在建国六十周年庆典之际出现了如下变化：
1. 很多高楼拔地而起；
2. 街道拓宽了，两旁建起了绿化带；
3. 建筑、街道增加了照明设施，夜景很美；
4. 道路、公园干净了，河水清澈了，能更多地看到蓝天、白云了。
请你写封120词左右的邮件给美国的笔友Harry，告诉他你们城市的上述变化，和他一起分享你的快乐心情。
注意：1. 邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
Dear Harry,
I’m so glad to write to you again to tell you about some changes in my city.________________
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Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
Li Lu

Answer 1

One possible version：
Dear Harry,
I’m so glad to write to you again to tell you about some changes in my city。As the 60th anniversary of our great motherland draws near ，a great many changes have taken place in our city。
To begin with，a lot of tall buildings have been constructed 。the roads and streets have been widened and now have many flowers ，trees and grass on both sides，so people feel pleasant when driving or riding a bike。Also，most buildings and streets have been equipped with many kinds of lights that look really beautiful at night 。what’s more mthere is less rubbish on the roads and in the parks and the rivers are becoming much cleaner 。
What makes me happiest is that we can see more blue sky and white clouds than before。Hope you can share my happiness！
Best wishes ！
Yours sincerely，
Lihua

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