Question

【题目】请看下面漫画以及李明的两篇日记，用英语写一篇短文。

（写作内容）

1.用约30个单词概述上述两篇日记的内容

2,用约120个单词发表你的观点，

内容包括：(1)陈述上述两篇日记及漫画所反映的何题；

(2)结合自身实际，谈谈日记及漫画给你的启示 .

（写作要求）

A.词数150左右。

B.作文中不得提及考生所在班级和本人姓名。

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Answer 1

【答案】Liming used to be tired of taking in knowledge passively. However, a different way of instructions encourage happy and efficient learning of the senior three student under enormous academic pressure.

With forced-feeding teaching method, which has become dominant in schools over the past decades, students get tired physically and mentally, their interests in study decreased and creation destroyed. To get high scores, both teachers and students believe learning is merely about importing knowledge, ignoring the fact that it is how to learn rather than how much to learn that counts.

This should set me thinking. I should focus on the mission of sustainable education, instead of only passing the Gaokao. I will be more active, creative and cooperative in the relaxing and open learning environment, thus expanding my knowledge and visions. As a saying goes, “teach a man to fish, and you feed him for the rest of his life . As students, we should also learn to “fill our belly” independently.

【解析】

本书面表达属于读写任务写作。考生先要概括两篇日记的内容，然后结合日记和漫画陈述问题，最后写出启示。

本书面表达属于读写任务写作。动笔前，首先要认真阅读原文，并理解其内容。其次，认真看清题目要求，在稿子上列出提纲。最后，根据要求写出文章。这篇书面表达写作内容：1.用约30个单词概述上述两篇日记的内容；2. 用约120个单词发表你的观点。内容包括：(1)陈述上述两篇日记及漫画所反映的何题；(2)结合自身实际，谈谈日记及漫画给你的启示。写作的时候，要按照要点去表达，不能有遗漏，要注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己会的单词、词组和句型，同时也要注意使用一些高级语法和句型，使自己的文章更有文采。