Question

5．请根据以下提示，并结合事例，用英语写一篇短文．
The best example of universally understood body language may be the smile．A smile can help us get through difficult situations and find friends in a world of strangers．A smile can open doors and tear down  walls
注意：①无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；
②除诗歌外，文体不限；
③文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；
④词数为120左右．

Answer 1

分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一：
I still remember how nervous I was on my first day in this new school several months ago，when I found it difficult to follow my English teacher in the first English class．
我仍然记得几个月前我来到新学校的第一天当我发现我的英语很难跟上老师的时候我有多紧张．
高分句型二：
In the morning class the next day，the English teacher came to me while I was reading the text aloud as other students．
在第二天早上，英语老师走到我身边当我正在大声读课文像别的同学那样时．

解答 Smile has magical power．I think it can drive winter from people's face．
I still remember how nervous I was on my first day in this new school several months ago，when I found it difficult to follow my English teacher in the first English class（高分句型一）．The teacher spoke English throughout the class，which was totally different from the lessons I had taken before．In the morning class the next day，the English teacher came to me while I was reading the text aloud as other students（高分句型二）．After listening to me for a while，she gave me a big smile and said she liked my voice very much．The smile shined  the whole day and the following days．A week later，I volunteered to take charge of English study in my class．
Thanks to the comforting smile in my first morning class，I begin to become confident．

点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题，并此为基础进行思维和联想，自由发挥．不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力，而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求．