Question

下面的这幅画展现了两人合做一张凳子却各忙各的情景，请根据对这幅画的理解，用英语写一篇短文。

你的短文应包含以下内容：

1、描述图片内容，如人物、动作、情景等；

2、图片主要反映了怎样的问题；

3、结合实际谈谈你对解决此类问题的看法；

4、词数100左右，开头已为你写好。

Cooperation which has always been a hot topic plays a very important role in today's world. But not everyone knows how to cooperate well.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Cooperation. which has always been a hot topic, plays a very important role in today's world d. But not everyone knows how to cooperate well.

In the picture, we can see two men are trying to make a bench together. Both o f them are working hard, sweating a lot But obviously they are fixing the legs on opposite sides.

Seeing the picture, I can't help thinking how ridiculous it is. The two men work as a team and both of them do make their effort. But unfortunately they just mind their own business without communicating with each other. It appears to me that they are not cooperating in an effective way. Working without cooperation leads to inefficiency.

But how can we cooperate more effectively? From my point of view, cooperation calls for effective communication, without which people will do things blindly. We should exchange ideas with our partners and work out a careful plan before taking actions. Otherwise, all the efforts will be in vain, just like what the two men do in the picture.

【解析】

试题分析：看图作文就是要求根据图画(或表格)的内容展开合理的想像，写出文章的一种写作方式。看图作文应做到以下几点： (1)认真读图，弄清大意：读图时要充分理解图画所表达的内容，弄清图中的人物在干什么，弄清图画背景与人物之间的联系，弄清事情发生的经过。(2) 理出要点，拟定提纲： (3) 紧扣要点，扩写成文。 (4) 通读短文，修正错误。写好文章之后应通读全文进行检查。在检查时，应着重看短文是否扣住图画的内容，要点是否有遗漏。同时，还要注意有无语法错误，如时态、人称等，是否符合文体特点、格式等等。

考点：考查看图写作

点评：读图之后，要根据图画表达的主要内容，理出表达的要点。列出要点时要注意分清主次，不能看到图中有什么就认为什么要写。看图作文时描述图画内容是不可取的，应充分展开想像使图画活起来。理出要点之后，就可以根据要点拟定提纲,即把整个图画中要表达的内容先用一句话写下来。在列出要点后，依据已经写出来的话语扩写成一篇短文。扩写时，可运用想象适度发挥，紧扣图画的内容，进行适当叙述，连贯通顺即可。