Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意： 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

After the Spring Festival, there arises some hot topics, and lucky money is including as well. To collect opinions from the public, an online survey has made these days.

82% of the participants regard lucky money as one of the most important traditional custom, representing good wishes from the elderly to the new generation. Besides, lucky money is the more attractive part for children, it forms the good memory of our childhood.

The rest, however, think bad of it. For one thing, the amount is grown bigger and bigger, making it a heavy load. For another, it has been a good excuse to bribe (贿赂) people in the power, which is bad for building a healthy and harmonious society.

Personally speaking, lucky money is nothing wrong. Only when we know its meaning can you send our hearty wishes to the young.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】arises→arise

【2】including→included

【3】has后加been

【4】custom→customs

【5】more→most

【6】it→which

【7】bad→badly

【8】grown→growing

【9】the去掉

【10】you→we

【解析】

试题分析：通过修改作文方式的短文，考查学生对固定搭配，动词时态和语态，形容词副词等的掌握。

【1】arises→arise 考查there be句型。该句为there be句型，be动词的单复数取决于紧随其后的名词的单复数，由hot topics可知，这里动词需用复数形式。

【2】including→included 考查过去分词。be included“包括”，这里指的是钱也包括在内，所以需用过去分词。

【3】has后加been 考查被动语态。Online survey与make之间应该是被动关系，所以这里需在has后加been。

【4】custom→customs 考查名词。One of后加名词复数，所以这里需用复数形式。

【5】more→most 考查最高级。这里指的是最吸引人的一部分，所以应该用most。

【6】it→which 考查定语从句。因与前面一句没有连词连接，且中间是句号，故该句为非限制性定语从句，先行词为前面一句话的内容，所以这里需将it改为which。

【7】bad→badly 考查短语。修饰动词要用副词，所以这里需将bad改为badly。

【8】grown→growing 考查现在分词。这里指的是长的越来越大，所以该句需用进行时态，将grown改为growing。

【9】the去掉 考查短语。in power为固定短语，意为“执政的，掌权的”，所以这里需将the去掉。

【10】you→we 考查代词。这里指的是我们给年轻人祝福，所以需将you改为we。