Question

11．假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文．根据下列要点写封回信．
1．参加中文学习班
2．看中文书刊，杂志，报纸，电视
3．学唱中文歌曲，能更好的记单词
4．交中国朋友，帮助学习．
要求：1．回信包含所有要点，可适当增加内容，使行文连贯
      2．字数100字左右，信头已给出，不计入总字数．
Dear Peter，

 Yours truly
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于英文书信，是很常见的考查写作能力的形式，写作难度不大．根据提示信息要求给你的英国朋友Peter回信，告诉他如何才能学好中文．写作时注意以下几点：首先需要注意信件的写作格式规范，注意抬头和信尾的署名；其次要注意不能遗漏信件的要点．第三，写作时根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时和一般将来时两种时态．最后，注意尽量避免使用没有把握的单词和句子，保持字迹工整、卷面整洁．
（高分句型一） I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well．
该句使用了asking for…现在分词做定语，修饰letter；
（高分句型二）it is important to take a Chinese course，as you'll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students．
该句使用了it is+形容词 to do…做某事…；as 引导原因状语从句；
连接词使用合理，：First，Then，Besides，

解答 Dear Peter，
     （高分句型一） I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well．Here are a few suggestions．First，（高分句型二）it is important to take a Chinese course，as you'll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students．Then，it also helps to watch TV and read books，newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible．
     Besides，it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs，because by doing so you'll learn and remember Chinese words more easily．You can also make more Chinese friends．They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese．Try and write to me in Chinese next time．
                                                                                   Best wishes．
                                                                                  Li Hua

点评 写作时首先审题，本题体裁为建议信，属于常规复习内容．选择其中一条线路，围绕中国传统文化的主线去写就基本能扣题，稍微需要注意题干要点之间的界限，确保要点齐全．其次要考虑高分词语和句型的选用，从句、非谓语动词、倒装、强调句型等都是可考虑的高级句型；词语和句型的选用要包含作者的感情色彩和增强表达的气势；再次，运用关联词如besides、what's  more、moreover、for one thing …for another等，使文字更加流畅．