Question

【题目】With the widespread use of technologies like GPS and Internetconnected cameras，parents can now keep an eye on their children wherever they are.

The combination of hightech tools and highlyprotective parents has set off the creation of a GPSequipped wristwatch that allows parents to listen in real time to what their children are doing.The device has caused complaints from teachers since some parents began equipping their children with the watch so they can listen in on what happens at school.

A teacher surnamed You at a wellknown primary school in Pudong New Area discovered someone was eavesdropping(偷听) on her lessons after a parent of one of her students posted something she said online while class was still on.You soon found out the parent had given her child a watch that could send out the sounds in the classroom to her mobile phone.Soon，other parents decided to equip their own children with the devices.

You was annoyed to find out her students’ parents were spying on her.It made her feel as if they distrusted her.After You told her fellow teachers what had happened，they discovered that some of their students were also wearing the watches.

写作内容

1．用约30个单词写出上文概要；

2．用约120个单词发表你的观点，内容包括：

(1)阐述你对家长如此运用高科技产品的看法；

(2)用2～3个理由或论据支撑你的观点。

写作要求

1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；

2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；

3．不必写标题。

评分标准

内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。

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Answer 1

【答案】To keep an eye on their children，many parents nowadays equip their children at school with wristwatches.Despite its convenience，teachers hold a negative attitude as they feel spied on.

Generally，I stand on the teachers’ side and don’t support those parents’ practice.To begin with，listening in on what happens at school via wristwatches，parents are caring too much for their children，which shows a departure from their initial intention of making their kids learn to be independent.In addition，with the wristwatches sending out sounds frequently in class，students will unavoidably be distracted，which results in their underachievement in study.Last but not least，this equipment is a symbol of distrust in schools and an invasion of privacy to teachers and other students.

To conclude，we’d better say no to the hightech devices of wristwatches in class.No one can base their own convenience on others’ inconvenience.

【解析】本文属于读写任务写作，动笔前，一定要认真阅读原文，并理解内容。认真看清题目要求，这篇书面表达给了一段材料：先要求以约30个词概括上文的主要内容，要求有很高的概括提炼的能力，要抓住文章的主题，本文主要讲了对家长使用智能手表来监控孩子学习的看法，再以约120个词写一篇短文，按照要点去表达，不能有遗漏，写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。写作时尽量使用自己会的单词、词组和句型，同时也要注意使用一些高级语法和句型，使自己的文章更有文采。

【亮点说明】这篇范文要点全面，语言精炼，简单句和复杂句交叉使用：如parents are caring too much for their children，which shows a departure from their initial intention of making their kids learn to be independent.这里使用了非限制性定语从句；students will unavoidably be distracted，which results in their underachievement in study.这里使用了非限制性定语从句。