Question

根据下面的汉语提示写一篇英语短文，词数120左右。
某中学新建的电子阅览室即将投入使用，一次能容纳200名学生。学校正征询学生意见。假如你是其中的一名学生，请根据以下要点对阅览室的使用提出建议，并陈述理由：
1．电子阅览室的开放时间
2．向学生提供的浏览项目
3．安全管理等注意事项
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Answer 1

不唯一
I’m very glad that our newly-built electronic reading room will be put into use soon .Here are my suggestions.
Since the E- reading room can hold 200 students, I think it should be accessible to all the students. In order to suit the students’ timetable, it is better to be open from 6:00a.m.to 10:00p.m. from Monday to Friday and 7:00 a.m. to 11:00 p.m. at weekends. As for the books to be stored, the students are very interested in reference books about all the subjects we’re learning. Besides, we also welcome different types of dictionaries, novels, magazines and newspapers, so that we can have a wide range of books to choose from. Once in the reading room, the students are required to keep the room clean and operate according to the instructions. Chatting, smoking and eating are surely forbidden in the reading room.
I am sure the reading room will be of great help for us.

解析试题分析：书面表达是检验学生交际能力的一个重要途径。主要考查学生综合运用英语语言的能力，涉及学生的词汇量，正确运用单词的能力，对所学语法的掌握程度，能否按照英语习惯正确表达所要表达的意思的能力等等。测试的题型主要有应用文，看图作文和提示作文。测试内容常常与学生的生活密切相关，也可能是环保或社会焦点。“看图作文”较多，但提示作文有增加的趋势；文体以应用文为主，兼有记叙文、说明文、描写文、议论文。
考点：这是一篇记叙文。
点评：提醒考生注意适当增加细节以使行文连贯，比如适当选用表示因果、递进、转折关系的连接词，使文章流畅、通顺，并避免因反复使用句式相同的简单句而造成的单调感。