Question

阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
A young man was complaining about his bad luck and poverty. He frowned (皱眉) all day. A wise old man came to him and said, “Hey, kid, why are you so unhappy?”
“I don’t understand why I'm so poor!” he replied.
“Poor? I think you are very wealthy!” the wise old man said sincerely.
The young man was puzzled, “Why do you say that?”
“Supposing someone offers you one thousand dollars to cut your finger off, would you do it?” “Of course not!” the young man replied.
“And ten thousand dollars to chop your leg off?” “Certainly not!”
“A hundred thousand dollars to scoop your eyes out?” “Surely not!”
“One million dollars to turn you into a 90-year-old man immediately?”
“Definitely not!”
“Ten million dollars to take your life right away?” “Absolutely not!”
The wise old man said with a smile, “So there you are. You already possess what is worth more than ten million dollars. Why are you still sad to be so poor?” After the young man listened to the wise old man's words, it started to become clear to him.
[写作内容]
1. 以约30个词概括文章的主要内容；
2．然后以“健康比金钱更重要”为题发表自己的，字数大约120左右，内容包括：
(1) 对话中这位年长智者的观点是否正确，为什么?
(2) 健康与金钱的关系，并试举例说明；
(3) 作为一名高中生，应该如何处理健康与金钱的关系。
[写作要求]
1.在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子；
2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
[评分标准]
概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。

Answer 1

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Health is More Important than Money
A young man was always complaining about his poverty. However, only after a conversation with a wise old man did he realize wealth was not money but health.
I definitely approve the wise old man’s idea that the real wealth is our healthy body rather than enough money. My reason is that it is no use having enough money if we have no health body.
As for the relationship between health and money, in my opinion, health is more important than money. Without good health, it is impossible to do whatever you want to do. For example, supposing you are handicapped in wheelchair, even if you have a big sum of money, you can’t still travel all over the world and go wherever you want to go.
As a result, as a high school student, not only should we be concerned about our study, but we should also make more use of our time to do sports and do more body-buildings.

试题分析：概括原文的大意不是缩写，不能引用原文的语句，它也不是改写，不能把原句加以变形就完事；主要是概括和抽象，把具体的信息用一些具有高度概括功能的词和句表述出来。与原文某个或某些句子完全一致或大部分一致。有同学写摘要就从原文的开头部分、中间部分和结尾部分各抄一句，以为这就是“概要”，这种认识是错误的，这样的“概要”是得不了分的。
点评：好作文应该是紧扣文章主题，遵循特定的文体格式，选用恰当的语言合理组织文章结构，内容统一、连贯，语法、拼写、标点正确，用词恰当。为了避免太多单词拼写错误，语法错误，不要为了追求词语的华丽而堆积一些自己也没把握的单词，不要刻意追求长句而写一些自己不知对错的有多个从句组成的长句。考试时最好选择自己最有把握的词汇，短语，句式。