Question

14．假如你是李华，"母亲节"在即，你班将举行一次"学会感恩"的主题班会．现在请你以感恩父母为话题，结合以下要点，以书信的形式把你想说的话写给父母．
内容提示：（1）感谢父母的养育之恩；
          （2）回忆父母的艰辛；
          （3）请父母放心…
注意：（1）字数在100字左右；
      （2）开头和结尾已写好，不计入总词数；
      （3）可根据情况增减细节，详略得当．
Dear Mum and Dad，
   How I love you!
Thank you very much for giving me life and bringing me up!（感谢父母的养育之恩）；In order to provide me with a better life，I know how many hardships you have experienced，getting up early and staying up late，to earn every coin to cover my schooling and my life expenses．【高分句型一】You hope I can enter a good college and get a good job in the future．However，I was always doing something wrong that made you upset，so I must say sorry to you．（回忆父母的艰辛）
Mum and Dad，don't worry about me now because I've grown up!I will study hard，keep fit and form good habits．Never will I do anything disappointing．【高分句型二】I will learn as much as I can to get better exam results and realize my dream．I'm sure you'll be proud of me soon!（请父母放心…）
Your son，
 Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文为书信，写作时应注意格式．在回忆父母的艰辛时，用过去时态；其他时态为一般现在时和一般将来时为主．人称以第一人称为主．
写作要点包括：1．感谢父母的养育之恩．2．回忆父母的艰辛．3．请父母放心…
重点短语和句型：
bring up  将某人抚养大
in order to 为了
hardship 艰难时刻
upset 失望的
句型一：
In order to provide me with a better life，I know how many hardships you have experienced，getting up early and staying up late，to earn every coin to cover my schooling and my life expenses．
in order to作目的状语，getting up early and staying up late 分词做插入语，表示补充说明，to earn every coin to cover my schooling and my life expenses动词不定式表目的．
句型二：
Never will I do anything disappointing．
以否定词never开头的倒装句．

解答 Dear Mum and Dad，
       How I love you!Thank you very much for giving me life and bringing me up!（感谢父母的养育之恩）；In order to provide me with a better life，I know how many hardships you have experienced，getting up early and staying up late，to earn every coin to cover my schooling and my life expenses．【高分句型一】You hope I can enter a good college and get a good job in the future．However，I was always doing something wrong that made you upset，so I must say sorry to you．（回忆父母的艰辛）
       Mum and Dad，don't worry about me now because I've grown up!I will study hard，keep fit and form good habits．Never will I do anything disappointing．【高分句型二】I will learn as much as I can to get better exam results and realize my dream．I'm sure you'll be proud of me soon!（请父母放心…）
                                                                                                                                                                                        Your son，
                                                                                                                                                                                          Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．