Question

有一批要到中国投资的外国企业家在我国某城市参观考察。假定你是接待员，要向外宾们介绍这个城市的概括。请你用英语写一篇发言稿，须包括以下内容：
这是一座新兴的现代化城市，建于20世纪80年代；
海陆空交通方便，又有一条与首都北京相连的高速公路；
自然资源丰富，电力及其他能源供应充足；
公共秩序良好，政府多方面支持外国投资者。
注意：1 词数：100左右。
2 可以适当增减细节，但不能逐字翻译。
3 短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：高速公路：freeway   公共秩序：public order  
投资者：investor 供应supplies of
Ladies and Gentlemen,
Welcome to our city. Now let me introduce …

Answer 1

One possible version:
Ladies and Gentlemen,
Welcome to our city. Now let me introduce our city to you. Our city is a newly-built modern city. It was set up in the early 1980s, but it has been developing rapidly. From here you can travel to anywhere by water, by air or by land. Recently another freeway which is connected with Beijing has started being used. The areas around our city are rich in natural resources. And we have enough supplies of electricity and other forms of energy. The public order is very nice. Besides, the governments of our country and our city support foreign investors in many aspects. We expect more and more friends to come and invest in our city.
That’s all. Thank you!

解析试题解析：从文章体裁分析，本文是一篇记叙文的写作，写的是对这座城市的简单介绍。文章内容要点：这是一座新兴的现代化城市，建于20世纪80年代；海陆空交通方便，又有一条与首都北京相连的高速公路；自然资源丰富，电力及其他能源供应充足；公共秩序良好，政府多方面支持外国投资者。时态：一般现在时；注意使用连词和高级词汇、句型。
【亮点说明】
文章使用了非常好的短语和句子给文章增色，如Recently another freeway which is connected with Beijing has started being used.(定语从句)，but it has been developing rapidly（现在完成进行时）并且主语了句子的衔接如：but，And ,besides,等。
考点：提纲作文写作。