Question

14．如今越来越多的家长花巨资送孩子出国学习，某英文报社就这一问题做了调查，并开辟专栏讨论．请你根据所给提示，以"On Teenagers Studying Abroad"为题用英语写一篇短文．
1、38%的人赞成这种做法：
①孩子可以接受良好的教育：学好外语将来发展的机会更多
②开阔眼界，学会独立生活
2、62%的人不赞成这种做法：①花钱太多
②孩子太小无法照顾自己：安全问题令人担忧
3、你的看法（赞成与否）并给出至少一条理由
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On Teenagers Studying Abroad
Nowadays more and more people are sending their children abroad for further study．                  

Answer 1

分析 这是关于送孩子出国学习的优缺点的作文．根据题目要求可知用第一人称和一般现在时态．内容包括：一提出讨论的话题；二支持方的观点；三反对方的观点；四自己的看法．
高分句型：
1．What's the most important thing is that they can also learn to depend on themselves and broaden their horizons，improving their understanding of the world．句子里What's the most important thing 是主语从句；that they can also learn to depend on themselves and broaden their horizons，是表语从句；improving their understanding of the world是现在分词做结果状语．
最重要的事是，孩子可以学会独立生活，开阔他们的眼界，从而提高他们对于世界的理解．
2．Although studying abroad is a good choice，students can also receive good education in our country，as long as our government take some measures to set up various schools and colleges to meet the needs of people句子里Although 引导让步状语从句，表示"尽管"；as long as 引导条件状语从句，表示"只要"；take some measures to 表示"采取措施做"．
尽管去国外学习是一个好的选择，但是只要我们的政府采取措施建立各种类型的学校来满足人们的需求，学生在我们国家也可以受到好的教育，

解答 On Teenagers Studying Abroad
Nowadays more and more people are sending their children abroad for further study．（提出讨论的话题）38%of the people agree to this．They think their children can receive better education and learn a foreign language as well．And they can have more golden opportunities to develop themselves．What's the most important thing is that they can also learn to depend on themselves and broaden their horizons，improving their understanding of the world．【高分句型一】（支持方的观点）
However，62% of the people are not in favor of it．The reasons are as follows．First of all，they think studying abroad costs too much money．Besides，children are too young to take care of themselves well．Many parents are worried about the safety of their children．（反对方的观点）
In my opinion，I agree with the second view．Although studying abroad is a good choice，students can also receive good education in our country，as long as our government take some measures to set up various schools and colleges to meet the needs of people【高分句型二】（自己的看法）

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