Question

为了加强英语教学，我校准备高薪聘请外教来校任教。有些同学认为有必要，而有些却不以为然。请就此事给校长写封信，阐述聘请外教的利和弊，供校长参考。

要求：1. 利和弊至少各包括3个理由。

2. 字数: 120左右。

3. 开头、结尾已给出。

Dear Principal:

   These days all my classmates are talking about employing foreign teachers.

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   Anyway you are Principal. It’s up to you to decide whether to employ foreign teachers or not. We believe you will make a wise decision.

Best wishes!

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

   Dear Principal:

These days all my classmates are talking about employing foreign teachers.

Some students think it's necessary to have foreign teachers because it can provide us with a better opportunity to learn English. We can practice spoken English with native speakers and improve our language abilities. Moreover, it can make us more interested in the English language. We can learn more about some foreign customs and culture.

On the contrary, some other students are strongly against the idea. They think the most important thing for us is to be admitted into universities. However, having a foreign teacher seems to be no good to improve the academic achievements. And it may cause some trouble while communicating with them as there is culture diversity. What is worse, it costs a lot of money to employ foreign teachers.

Anyway you are Principal. It's up to you to decide whether to employ foreign teachers or not.

Best wishes.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本篇写作题材是外教的两种不同观点。这种文章一般层次比较清晰，四段：第一段为总述；第二段正方观点及依据；第三段反方观点及依据；第四段自己观点。要注意的是1.在列举双方依据时要尽量使语言多样化；2.自我观点表达时要有正确的判断，要有辩证的思维。一篇文章需要有正确的句子才能明了清晰的表达作者的意思。考生应明白高考书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求的是将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确地表达意思的能力。考生应该用自己最熟悉、最有把握的词、短语及句式，按一定的逻辑顺序和意义层次完成短文，划分好文章的自然段落，注意段落之间的发展和连贯。尽量使用不同长度的句子，使句型多样化。适当使用连词，使句子间的衔接自然流畅。

【亮点说明】Some students think it's necessary to have foreign teachers because it can provide us with a

better opportunity to learn English.这句话有宾语从句，原因状语从句，还有it做形式主语，They think the most important thing for us is to be admitted into universities.这是不定式做表语的用法，It's up to you to decide whether to employ foreign teachers or not.这是用了固定句型。还有这篇文章出现一些关联词：moreover，however，On the contrary, What is worse,所以文章读起来很连贯。

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