Question

【题目】假定你是高一学生李华，在学校看到如下通知，请根据通知的内容和写作要点，向学校写一封申请信：

HOST FAMILIES WANTED Teachers and students from Linwood High School will visit our school in the summer break. Host families are wanted to accommodate（为……提供食宿）our friends. Requirements: Can communicate in English. A Separate room is a must. A primate car is preferred. If interested, please send your APPLICATION IN ENGLISH to the Office of the Headmaster before Friday.

写作要点：

1. 你对参与该活动的认识；

2. 你的优势；

3. 作为接待家庭的打算。

注意：

1. 可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

2. 词数不少于100字。开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am Li Hua from Class One, Senior One. I am writing to

_______________________________________________________________________.

_______________________________________________________________________.

_______________________________________________________________________.

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am Li Hua from Class One, Senior One. I am writing to apply to become one of the host families to accommodate our friends.

From my point of view, through various arrangements, this activity will strengthen the friendship between us, which will benefit our friends and all the participating students as well. There is no doubt that my family can undertake the task. To begin with, my fluency in English enables me to communicate with foreigners freely. Besides, my family can meet the requirements in housing and means of transportation.

If selected, my family will help them experience the natural beauty and cultural diversity by showing them around those places which are worth visiting including the city wall and having a taste of the delicious local food.

I’d appreciate it if my application was taken into account.

Yours sincerely

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇应用类作文。假定你是某校高一学生李华，下面的通知引起了你的注意。请根据通知内容和要求向学校写一封申请信。首先要读懂原文，然后根据要求写一封申请信。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型为文章润色。

【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语There is no doubt that毫无疑问；To begin with开始；be worth doiong值得做某事；write to sb 给某人写信；From my point of view, through various arrangements, this activity will strengthen the friendship between us, which will benefit our friends and all the participating students as well这个句子which引导非限制性定语从句；If selected, my family will help them experience the natural beauty and cultural diversity by showing them around those places which are worth visiting including the city wall and having a taste of the delicious local food这个句子运用到非谓语动词做状语，which引导定语从句；I’d appreciate it if my application was taken into account.这个句子it做形式宾语，真正的宾语是后面的不定式；