Question

12．人们结交的朋友通常有两种：与自己志趣相似的或不同的．两种朋友各有特点．请你以"Friends，Similar or Different？"为题，按照以下的英文提示写一篇英语短文．
Some people choose friends who are different from themselves．Others choose friends who are similar to themselves．Compare the advantages of the two kinds of friends．Which kind of friend do you prefer for yourself？Why？
注意：1．不少于120个词，文章的题目和开头已给出（不计词数）．
2．文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称．
Friends，Similar or Different？
It is very neccesary and important for everyone to have good friends．Some of our friends can be similar to us，and some of them can differ in many ways．Regardless of their similarities or differences，there are a few advantages of having such friends．
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Answer 1

分析 本文是提纲作文，作文主题明确，即""Friends，Similar or Different？"，根据所提供的材料信息，写一篇短文．阐述喜欢结交哪种朋友：是与自己志趣相似的还是不同的，并说明理由．
写作要点：1开头-引出话题．； 2．好处--选择与自己志趣相似的朋友；3．好处--选择与自己志趣不同的朋友；4．自己的观点；5．结尾-总结．
时态用一般现在时．人称以第一和第三人称为主．
重要短语：be similar to（与…相似），regardless of（不管，不顾），be beneficial（有益的），in that （因为 ），such as （例如），in addition（除…之外还），provide sb with sth（给某人提供某物），be different from（与…不同），of one's own（某人自己的），introduce sth to sb（介绍，某物给某人），offer sb sth（提供某人某物），as for（关于），prefer to do sth（更喜欢做某事），on a certain matter（在某个事情上）．
【高分句型一】
1．Having friends who are similar to us can be beneficial，in that we can enjoy things together，such as going to clubs or to the movies．
①此处是由关系代词"who"引导的定语从句，先行词为"friends"，关系代词"who"在定语从句中做主语．
②此处"in that"意为"因为"引导原因状语从句．
【高分句型二】
2．In addition，having such friends can provide us with a companion to share our opinions．
此处是由动名词短语"having such friends"作主语，谓语动词为"can provide"，动词不定式短语"to share our opinions"作目的状语．
【高分句型三】
3．However，having friends who are different from us would have some advantages of its own．
此处是由动名词短语"having such friends"作主语，谓语动词为"can provide"，动词不定式短语"to share our opinions"作目的状语．
【高分句型四】
2．They are able to introduce new and different things to us，providing us with unexpected experiences in life．
 此处是由现在分词短语"providing us with unexpected experiences in life"作伴随状语，主句为"They are able to introduce new and different things to us"，主句的主语为"They"与所给动词"provide"构成逻辑上的主动关系．

解答 Friends，Similar or Different？It is very necessary and important for everyone to have good friends．Some of our friends can be similar to us，and some of them can differ in many ways．Regardless of their similarities or differences，there are a few advantages of having such friends．（开头-引出话题）
Having friends who are similar to us can be beneficial，in that we can enjoy things together，such as going to clubs or to the movies．【高分句型一】In addition，having such friends can provide us with a companion to share our opinions．【高分句型二】（好处--选择与自己志趣相似的朋友）
However，having friends who are different from us would have some advantages of its own．【高分句型三】They are able to introduce new and different things to us，providing us with unexpected experiences in life．【高分句型四】Furthermore，they could offer us a different view on a certain matter．（好处--选择与自己志趣不同的朋友）
As for me，I prefer to choose friends similar to myself．I feel that friendship between us will be smoother and more enjoyable．However，I never refuse a friendship offered by a friend who is different from me．（自己的观点）
I think the more friends we have，the simpler our life will be!（结尾）

点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．