Question

新课程实施以来，山东省率先取缔了晚课，你所在的班级学生对是否取消晚课展开了一次讨论。请结合下面的讨论内容用英语写一篇短文，并发表自己的看法。
赞成观点 
1. 能够给学生更多的自主学习和休息时间；
2. 有时间发展个人爱好。
反对观点
1. 相对在家自习，在校学习效率更高；
2. 通过师生交流、生生交流，学习问题可以得到及时解决。
你的观点……
注意：1. 词数100-120左右，开头已写好（不计入总词数）；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：autonomous learning自主学习
Recently, our class have held a heated discussion about whether evening classes should be cancelled.                                                             
                    

Answer 1

Recently, our class have held a heated discussion about whether evening classes should be cancelled. Opinions vary from person to person.
　　Some of them are in favour of the idea that the evening classes should be cancelled. To begin with, canceling evening classes means they have more time for autonomous learning and resting. Besides, students will have more time to develop their hobbies such as reading, playing sports, drawing and so on.
　　However, others object to this idea. From their point of view, compared with studying at home, studying at school may lead to high study efficiency. What's more, the problems existing in study can be coped with as soon as possible by means of communicating with teachers and cooperating with classmates.
　　Weighing pros and cons, I prefer studying at home because I'm willing to form the habit of being independent and I'm inclined to arrange study time myself.

试题分析：本文属于陈述正反方观点的议论文作文，主题是是否取消晚课，给出了大部分要点，就是对赞成和反对的不同观点，要考生给出自己的观点。文章结构清晰，先是赞同的观点，然后是反对的观点，最后是自己的观点，要求考生用地道的英语表达自己的观点，要求观点明确，驾驭语言的能力强，选择词汇的时候要选择相对高级的词汇，也要运用多种句型，让文章更有变化。难度在于选择合适的词汇和句型表达文章需要的意思，可以变换使用一些容易驾驭的句子或者词汇实现同样的目的。在写作的时候要运用合适的连接词把要点串联起来，使文章成为一个整体。
点评：本文属于正反方观点作文，但是要点还是比较多的，考生可以自己添加部分。在分析部分已经详细说明了。在写作的时候要适合合适的连接词来连接各要点，使他们成为整体。要选择高级的词汇和句型，让文章有变化，有层次。