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16．南昌拥挤的道路给人们带来不便，引发社会广泛热议．是否应该拥有私家车，有人赞成，有人反对．请你以Whether or not---Owning a private car为题，用英语论述人们的观点，并给出你自己的观点．
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Whether or not---Owning a private car
Nowadays，masses of cars are crowded on the roads in Nanchang City，causing great inconvenience and a heated discussion．Different ideas vary from person to person．

Answer 1

分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等．
（高分句型一）And with a car they can go where they like and enjoy themselves by making trips to the country or seaside on the weekends．
该句型使用where…引导一个宾语从句，句意为：有车，他们就可以去他们想去的地方；
（高分句型二）They maintain that as more and more cars run in the street，a large volume of poisonous gas has been given off，polluting the atmosphere and causing actual harm to the health of people．
as引导方式状语从句，随着…；该句还使用被动结构，has been given off；polluting…是现在分词做状语，表示结果；
高级词汇：rely on 依靠；object to 反对；restrict限制；

解答 Whether or not---Owning a private car
Nowadays，masses of cars are crowded on the roads in Nanchang City，causing great inconvenience and a heated discussion．Different ideas vary from person to person．
      Some people claim that there are many advantages of owning a private car．It gives a much greater degree of comfort．For example，they are no longer forced to rely on public transport．（高分句型一）And with a car they can go where they like and enjoy themselves by making trips to the country or seaside on the weekends．
     However，others strongly object to owning private cars．（高分句型二）They maintain that as more and more cars run in the street，a large volume of poisonous gas has been given off，polluting the atmosphere and causing actual harm to the health of people．What's more，in fact，private cars have contributed to a serious traffic problem．
    Personally，I think private cars should be restricted rather than encouraged．

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