Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你班的外籍教师Mr. Smith 即将回国。他喜欢中国文化，所以你送他一组中国剪纸（福、寿、喜）。请写一封送别信，简介礼物寓意，并表达谢意和祝愿。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 书信的开头和结尾以为你写好。

参考词汇：1.剪纸paper cuttings; 2.福 Fu；3.寿 Shou；4.喜 Xi

Dear Mr. Smith,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mr. Smith,

It is really hard for me to say goodbye to you. I sincerely thank you for your assistance in my study and treasure every moment we spent together on campus. Without your excellent teaching, I wouldn’t have made such great progress in English.

Since you like Chinese traditional culture, I’d like to present you a set of paper cuttings. They are not only traditional decorations but also ancient handicraft arts, which convey good moral meanings. Fu, Shou and Xi represent fortune, long-life or longevity and happiness respectively. These works are really worth collecting.

Thank you again and wish you a pleasant journey. I do hope that our friendship will last forever.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】试题分析：本文是一封送别信。试题只给出写作框架，并未给出所有的具体写作细节，为半开放性写作。写好此文，需注意三点：一是写信格式要准确，信的开头已经给出，但切要写好信的结尾。二是要详略得当，本文应重点写的是简介礼物寓意，并表达谢意和祝愿。三要注意适当地增加细节，恰当地使用连接过渡词，以使行文连贯。另外，在写作时要注意时态、语态的合理运用。

【亮点说明】

本文是一封书信，格式正确，内容符合要求，采用三段式，句中使用高级句子。It is really hard for me to say goodbye to you.动词不定式作真正的主语；treasure every moment we spent together on campus.省略that的定语从句用在句中；Since you like Chinese traditional culture, I’d like to present you a set of paper cuttings. since引导原因状语从句；They are not only traditional decorations but also ancient handicraft arts, which convey good moral meanings. not only…but also结构和which引导的非限制性定语从句完美结合；I do hope that our friendship will last forever.强调谓语的运用堪称经典。