Question

假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Bob将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文，来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提供的信息，写信介绍住房的情况，并告知住房面积为25平方米，月租500元。
注意：1. 词数：100左右。
2. 参考词汇：房租 rent (n.) 。

Dear Bob,
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Yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Bob,
I’m so glad to know that you’ll come to our city to learn Chinese. You asked me to find a place for you. Now I’ve found one that I think is pretty good. It is on Fang Cao Street which is near the No.11 bus stop and just one stop away from Jianxin Chinese School.
It's a small flat of 25 square meters on the third floor, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. In the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair. The rent is 500 yuan per month. I hope you’ll like it. If not, I’ll try to find another place for you.
I’m expecting your coming.
All the best!
Yours,
Li Hua

试题分析：这篇文章是图画类写作，要求写信介绍住房的情况，包括住房内部的结构和外面的设施，要求认真审图，将图介绍清楚，同时介绍细节，注意方位的表达，也要按照文体和篇章要求组织语篇。 4. 润色，注意措辞、复杂句式及承上启下的自然衔接，校对细节。
【亮点说明】所给范文语言简洁，运用了好的词组和句子： All the best!万事如意， It is on Fang Cao Street which is near the No.11 bus stop and just one stop away from Jianxin Chinese School.这句话用了定语从句，It's a small flat of 25 square meters on the third floor, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen.这句话用了复合结构， If not, I’ll try to find another place for you. 这句话用了省略句。