Question

【题目】假定你是高二学生李华，你最近转到一所英语学校学习。请根据下列提示，用英语给你的美国笔友John Russel写一封电子邮件，谈一谈你的处境。

1.面临挑战（新同学、新老师、新课程等）；

2.如何适应。

注意：

1.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

2. 词数100左右。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear John Russell,

I’ve changed my school for an English one recently. While it is a good decision, I face many challenges. Almost all my classmates are strangers. I also have new teachers to deal with and the new subjects make me anxious, too. I’m afraid that some of them are difficult to learn.

However, I have nothing to do but get up courage to cope with my new situation. I’m trying to get along well with my classmates. Besides, I’m adjusting myself to the teachers’ teaching methods to make quick progress. As for the subjects, I must focus on each one.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】书面表达的解题思路：

1.确定文章的体裁，本题所要求写的书面表达是电子邮件，那么首先就需要知晓电子邮件的写作特点。

2.确定文章时态的基调，确定文章时态的基调对于整个写作非常重要。它直接决定了不同句子使用的时态正确与否。这篇短文应该用现在完成时和一般现在时为主。

3. 给文章划分基本段落，仔细阅读题目要求和文字提示，领会要写的文章的主题，确定文章的段落，写出各段的主题句。本题中的内容要点有：①.写信的目的；②. 面临的挑战（新同学、新老师、新课程）；③. 如何适应。这样确定文章的基本段落分为两段或三段。

4.尝试用高级词汇，使可读性增强。美化句子可以采用复合句和特殊的句型结构，也可以采用形式主语、形式宾语或简略句来实现。

5.连句成篇，在连句成篇的过程中需要注意过渡句和连接词的使用。

【范文亮点】

文中使用了多个连词However，Besides，使文章逻辑清楚，衔接紧密。并且I have nothing to do but get up the courage to cope with my new situation.句中使用了have nothing to do but do sth这一固定短语，还有get along well with，adjust myself to，focus on及as for等短语，使文章增色。