Question

假如你是李华，你的笔友Tom最近发来E-mail说他最近学习状态不佳。请根据下列要点，给Tom回复E-mail，给他介绍几个自我激励的方法。可适当加入细节，以使行文连贯

词数在100左右。

提示：1. 每天花十五分钟做自己最喜欢的事；

2. 随身携带纸和笔，每天至少记下一件让你感到骄傲的事情；

3. 停止负面思考，专注于解决学习问题。

参考词汇：自我激励 self-motivate v. 负面的negative

                                                                                

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Tom,

How are you recently? If you are still having trouble in learning, I hope these simple ways of self-motivation will help you:

First, you spend 15 minutes doing the things that you like most each day. As for me, it will be watering flowers after supper, or playing chess against the computer, and things like this.

Second, always carry a pen and a piece of paper so as to write down what you are proud of at any time. Every day you have to write at least one thing.

Third, stop negative thinking and focus on solving study problems.

Please do try these and I hope all goes well with you.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文，需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。

考点：提纲作文

点评：本文属于提纲作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。