Question

【题目】假设你是红星中学高三（1）班学生李华。为迎接建国70周年，上个月学校组织了“祖国在我心中”主题知识竞赛。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，介绍你和同学们参加活动的完整过程，并以“A Significant Event”为题，给校刊“英语角”投稿。词数不少于60。

A Significant Event

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Answer 1

【答案】A Significant Event

Last month, our school organized a knowledge contest entitled “Motherland in My Heart”, which proved to be a significant event.

After the teacher announced the news, everyone was eager to participate. As we knew the victory required careful preparation, we spent the following days working on it. We surfed the Internet about the changes in different aspects, including economy, culture, technology, and so on. We also invited an expert to deliver a lecture on the development of our country during the past 70 years. Having learnt about these achievements, we felt so proud of our country and became more motivated for the contest. Finally came the big day. The competition was fierce because every team was well-prepared. My classmates and I went to great lengths and we answered every question confidently. After a few rounds, our team finally won the top prize. Holding the trophy and flowers, we cheered for our success with great joy.

We not only felt satisfied with our team effort, but also learned much more about the significant changes in China.

【解析】

本文属于图画作文，主题为祖国在我心中的竞赛活动过程。

第一步，本文属于图画作文，主题为祖国在我心中的竞赛活动过程，时态为一般过去时。四幅图的具体内容为：①告知主题知识竞赛的信息；②多种方式积极准备；③比赛激烈；④获奖。

第二步：根据关键要点，确定关键词，如：knowledge contest（知识竞赛），significant event（重要事件），announce the news（通知消息），deliver a lecture（做演讲），the top prize（一等奖）等。

第三步：根据提示及关键词进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题以及句子结构完整。

第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，使之自然流畅，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面。