Question

我班就“有些学生在学校贴吧上发表对老师不满的言语”一事是否妥当进行讨论。下面是讨论的结果。请你以 “We should express opinions on our teachers in a right way” 为主题 写一篇报道介绍这次讨论的情况以及你的观点。　

多数学生认为是错误的	他们的理由：1.老师永远值得尊重 2. 背地里说坏话是卑鄙的 3.学生应坦诚跟老师交流
少数学生认为是恰当的	他们的理由：1.可安全、自由地表达自己观点 2.当面说会让老师难堪的
你的观点	？

注意：1.词数120左右；   

2.  参考词汇：贴吧 post bar,  卑鄙的mean(adj.) ,  难堪的embarrassed (adj.)      

背地里behind one’s back/privately

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Last week there was a heated discussion about whether we should express freely our opinions on our teachers in our school’s post bar. Different students have various opinions on it. Here are their words:

A majority of the students think that the teachers must be worth respecting permanently. Besides, it is mean that one person make any irresponsible comments behind on others, especially our loved teachers. As a senior student, we should learn how to make a deep communication with our teachers when we have any dissatisfaction to our teachers.

There is no denying that some students have different opinions and their behaviors. They think that only in this way can they express their real thought and feelings freely and safely. On the other hand, if a student makes much complaint to teachers face to face, it will bring much embarrass to our teachers. 

In my opinion, we shouldn’t stab our teacher in the back; we should be honest to exchange our inside words with our teachers, which can make the two sides of us beneficial.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇典型的正反观点类议论文体的写作，它以表格的形式提出了论点（有些学生在学校贴吧上发表对老师不满的言语）和论据，还以文字提示形式提出了话题及需要考生自由发挥的部分（你的看法），自己的看法可选择上述中的任何一种，并就此发表个人的见解。本文的重点是表格中两种观点的陈述，以三段式的形式来写作比较好。

考点:考查正反观点类议论文写作 

点评：本文题型是考生分词熟悉的正反观点类的议论文，在平时的练习中也有相应的模板。审题时注意本文使用一般现在时，人称以第三人称为主，发表个人意见时使用第一人称。本文的要点均已给出，考生需要使用合适的连接词把孤立的要点联系成文。如for one thing, for another; besides, firstly, secondly, last but not least等。也要使用一些高级的词汇词组如 be supposed to do sth, benefit 等以提升文章的档次分。在文章红可以适当使用一至两句谚语如：Every coin has two sides等可以大大提高文章的文采，提高获得高分的可能性。