Question

假如你叫李华，你的好友李林发QQ向你询问如何写好英语作文。请根据以下提示回复。

收集好词好句并记忆；

背诵范文；

经常练笔。

注意：

可适当发挥，注意行文连贯；

词数120左右。开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Dear Li Lin,

    Glad to recive your message. At present I am writing to tell you how to attain a highly readable composition.

First and foremost, an effective way, to the best of my knowledge, is to collect classic words and sentences, processing them over and over until you bear them in mind. The more vocabulary you accumulate, the more freely you can apply them when writing. What’s more, reciting fantastic possible versions and sentence structures worth imitating can get you to make enough preparations in advance. Last but not the least, it is a good reward to practise writing. Only by exercising can you put to use what you have gathered.

Don’t hesitate to ask for more if you have any questions. Look forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本题是一篇材料作文。题目要求回复好友李林如何写好英语作文。作文要点已经给出，写作前， 先构思好文章的结构，再依据所给要点进行适当的展开论述。写作时，注意书信的书写格式。

亮点说明：范文以第一人称进行叙述，比较客观，有说服力。整篇作文的时态，以一般现在时为主。范文分为三段，第一段总写，第二段展开叙述，第三段收尾。第二段使用了First and foremost, What’s more, Last but not the least来表示顺序，条理清楚，思路清晰；范文使用了很多的短语，如an effective way, to the best of my knowledge, in advance, Look forward to等，使作文内容比较充实；范文还使用了一些重要句型，如the more..., the more...越......就越......；worth imitating作后置定语；get sb to do sth让某人做某事；Only by exercising can you...是倒装句式，属于重点语法知识；put sth to/into use学以致用；hesitate to do sth犹豫做某事。语法知识的积累很重要，平时加强语法知识的实战演练。

考点：材料作文