Question

书面表达

假设你是Tom，曾在中国学习半年，现已回国。你想联系你的中国老师Mr．Yang，但没有其联系方式。请根据以下要点给你的中国同学李华写一封信：

1．感谢李华对你汉语学习的帮助；

2．询问Mr．Yang的近况并索要其联系方式；

3．邀请李华在圣诞节期间来美国感受美国文化。

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答案： Dear Li hua, 　　How is everything going recently?After I came back from America half a year ago, I often remember the days I was there, and I missed you and Ms．Smith very much．I am writing to ask about something about Ms．Smith．Could you tell me her email address or telephone number that I could contact her?I have something important to tell her． 　　As you know, the Spring Festival in China is coming soon, I really hope you could come to China to visit my house, and celebrate the traditional festival with my family together．Then I can be your guide to many places, and show you the culture which is different from yours． 　　Hope for you early reply, and best wishes! Yours, Tom 　　详解：首先考生应该把写信的目的陈述清楚；其次要照顾所给重点，也就是得分点，逐一陈述，切忌逐字逐句翻译，为了是句子之间紧凑，应该适当运用连接词。另外，作为优秀作文的前提是适当使用高级词汇及句型结构，主要是为了展示自己的写作功底。