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第二节书面表达 (满分35分)
2010年上海 “世博会”如期召开，倡导“城市让生活更美好”，假设你是李华，请你向学校英语报投稿，谈谈你心中的理想城市。内容包括如下几点：
1）交通    2）自然环境   3）人文环境 ( 如人际关系 )
注意：1. 词数100左右，开头语和结尾已为你写好；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear editor,
With Shanghai Expo being held as expected, the theme of “Better City, Better Life” has been become widely known all over the world. ______________________________________________
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Best wishes,
Yours,
Li Hua        

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Dear editor, 
With Shanghai Expo being held as expected, the theme “Better City, Better Life” has been widely known all over the world. Here I’m writing to share the idea of my dream city.
In my opinion, a wonderful city should be one that distinguishes in the following aspects. To begin with, an appealing city should provide convenient and comfortable transport, which means people can easily choose whatever ways to travel anywhere. Besides, it should offer people a pleasant environment with plenty of green trees, clean streets as well as fresh air. Last but not least, in a charming city, citizens can enjoy a friendly and harmonious community and are always ready to help and care about each other.
In a word, an attractive city is one highly developed in different areas to make sure people can live happily.
Best wishes,
Yours,
Li Hua

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