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2．假设你是红星中学高三（1）班的学生李华，校报英文版正在开展"续写雷锋日记"活动．请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，将你所做的一件好事以日记形式记述下来，向校报投稿．
注意：
（1）日记的开头已为你写好．
（2）词数不少于60．

Answer 1

分析 本文是图画类作文，要求根据四幅图的先后顺序及所给内容要点将所做的一件好事以日记形式记述下来，既是情景作文又是一种提纲作文．在写作时，描述图片应以第一、三人称和过去时态为主．根据情景的发展，抓住细节按顺序安排好材料．重要短语：look puzzled（看起来迷惑），sb be lost（某人迷路），go up to sb （走到某人跟前…．），look for （寻找），appreciate one's help （感谢某人的帮助），wave good-bye to sb（跟某人再见）．

解答 Saturday，June 2                                    Fine
This morning，when I was walking on the street，I saw that two travelers were reading a map，looking puzzled．It seemed they were lost．（发现） I went up to them and asked how I could help．They told me they were looking for the Temple of Heaven．（询问） I led them to the nearby bus stop and advised them to take Bus No.20，which could take them there directly．【高分句型】（告诉线路）They appreciated my help directly．Before long，the bus came，we waved good-bye to each other．Seeing them on the bus，I felt a kind of satisfaction．（分别）

点评 写好这类图片及提纲式作文的关键是认真分析所给提示信息，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将要点完整地表述出来，并认真看图，围绕主题，提炼要点，发挥想象，语言力求准确、简洁．选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性．同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等．