Question

10．假设你是张华，班里从美国转来一名同学Mike，他无法理解同学们经常谈论的"网络交友"，感到很苦恼．请根据下列要点用英语给他写封信，信中须包括：
1．帮他分析网络交友的利弊；
2．指出解决网络交友欺骗的方法．
注意：
1．词数120左右．信的开头和结尾已写好，不计人总词数；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
Dear Mike，
I'm sorry to know that you feel confused about making friends on line at your new Class．
…
Best regards．
Yours truly，
Zhang Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息班里从美国转来一名同学Mike，他无法理解同学们经常谈论的"网络交友"，感到很苦恼．请根据下列要点用英语给他写封信，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：帮他分析网络交友的利弊；指出解决网络交友欺骗的方法． 2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：laugh at 嘲笑；in my opinion 在我看来；make friends 交朋友；all over the world 全世界；every coin has two sides 事有利弊；take measures 采取措施；adapt to 适应；as soon as possible 尽快
I have ever read a story，which made me greatly shocked．（高分句型一）
Before meeting an on-line friend，they have to ensure that all the information concerning him or her is true．（高分句型二）
To solve the problems concerning making friends on line，I think，the government should take strong measures to punish those who cheat people on line．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Mike，
　　I'm sorry to know that you feel confused about making friends on line at your new class．I have ever read a story，which made me greatly shocked．（高分句型一）Such a kind-hearted girl was cheated and laughed at by the cheat．She wanted to help the boy，but what the boy said was a trap．
　　In my opinion，making friends on line is a good way to communicate with people from all over the world．However，every coin has two sides．When people try to make friends on line，they have to be very careful and cautious．Before meeting an on-line friend，they have to ensure that all the information concerning him or her is true．（高分句型二）
　　To solve the problems concerning making friends on line，I think，the government should take strong measures to punish those who cheat people on line．（高分句型三）As for those Internet users，they should be cautious when making friends on line．
　　I hope you can adapt to the new school life as soon as possible．
　　Best regards，
                                                                                                                                                                               Yours truly，
                                                                                                                                                                                Zhang Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．