Question

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意:  1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不记分。
My neighbor Li Hai is going to graduate college soon and he hasn’t found the job yet. He was once advising to learn computer skills, so he thought it was difficult. When he saw others learning English, he shook his head, says it was too hard to remember new words. He enjoyed watching TV, playing cards, smoke and so on. He felt it was hard for him to give away all these habits. Not long ago, he went to look for a job. When he knew talents were great needed, he sighed and regretted the time that what he had wasted. He told me how he wished he has worked hard in college and asked me not to copy his example.

Answer 1

小题1:graduate 后面加from
小题2:the改成 a
小题3:advising改成 advised
小题4:so 改成but
小题5:says 改成saying
小题6:smoke改成smoking
小题7:away改成up
小题8:great 改成greatly
小题9:去掉what
小题10:has改成 had

试题分析：我的邻居李海要大学毕业了，但是还没有找到一个工作。因为他有很多坏习惯，也不肯学习技术，当他因为没有才能找不到工作的时候，才后悔。
小题1:我的邻居李海要大学毕业了，graduate from “从…中毕业”
小题2:但是还没有找到一个工作。泛指“一份工作”，the改成 a
小题3:他被建议学习电脑科技。使用被动语态：advising改成 advised
小题4:他被建议学习电脑科技，但是他觉得很难。so 改成but
小题5:他摇摇头，说记单词太难了。says 改成saying，是做伴随状语
小题6:和watching TV, playing cards并列用动名词, smoke改成smoking
小题7:他觉得很难戒掉所有的坏习惯。Give away赠送，泄漏，改成give up放弃，戒掉
小题8:当他知道才能很重要的时候。用副词greatly修饰needed。
小题9:他后悔浪费掉的时间。这是定语从句，用that引导就可以
小题10:他告诉我他多么希望在大学的时候努力学习啊。Wish后面的从句用虚拟语气，用相应的过去时表示虚拟，因为是说的上大学的事情，用过去完成时：has改成 had