Question

【题目】增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，（____）并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

My brother Tom was very selfish when he was a little boy. He did not want share things with other people. For example, when he bought a chocolate cake, he put them in a secret place where I couldn’t find . Then he ate it all by himself. He never helped other. He said he is busy. That is, a game of tennis making him very busy. He did not care if something he did made people angry. For instance, on one night he played strong and loudly music till four o’clock in the morning. But he is difference now. He often helps grandma with housework, helps mom with cooking and helps his classmate with their lessons.

Answer 1

【答案】1:第二句want后面加 to

2:第三句them 改为it

3:where 改为which/that

4:第五句other改为others

5:第六句is改为was

6:第七句making改为made

7:第九句 on去掉

8:loudly改为loudp

9: difference 改为 different

10:classmate后加s

【解析】本文是一篇记叙文，说了作者在2001年夏天开始阅读英文书籍时的收获和困难，以及解决困难的方法。。

1.“He did not want share things with other people.”考查固定搭配“want to do stn.”，故添加to。

2.“For example, when he bought a chocolate cake, he put them in a secret place where I couldn’t find .”这里的巧克力蛋糕只有一个，故用单数的代词来代指，故将them改为it。

3.“For example, when he bought a chocolate cake, he put them in a secret place where I couldn’t find .”根据语境可知这里的先行词为secret place，which引导定语从句的时候,在从句中作主语,宾语或是表语，where引导定语从句时做的是状语， which代place在从句中作find的宾语。故将where改为which/that。

4. “He never helped other. ”考查other和others的区分。 other其他的,另外的,泛指另一个另一些。others泛指别的,其他人，是other的复数形式。这里指的是其他人，故将other改为others。

5.“He said he is busy. ”浏览全文可知文章为一般过去时态，根据时态一致的原则，故将is改为was。

6.“That is, a game of tennis making him very busy.” a game of tennis与him为主动的关系，且浏览全文可知文章为一般过去时态，根据时态一致的原则，故将making改为made。

7.“For instance, on one night he played strong and loudly music till four o’clock in the morning. ”“one night”表示在一天晚上，前面不需要加介词，故删掉on。

8.“For instance, on one night he played strong and loudly music till four o’clock in the morning. ” music为名词，应使用形容词修饰，故将loudly改为loud。

9.“But he is difference now. ”这里的“不同”指性质，应使用形容词形式，故将difference改为different。

10.“He often helps grandma with housework, helps mom with cooking and helps his classmate with their lessons.”根据their我们知道不只有一个同学，classmate为可数名词，应该使用复数形式，故将classmate改为classmates。