Question

【题目】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。上周你们班组织了一次去红星剧院观赏相声的活动。请按照以下四幅图的先后顺序，以“A Taste for Chinese Crosstalk”为题，写一篇英文周记， 记述你们观赏并体验相声（crosstalk）的全过程。

注意：词数不少于60。

提示词：长袍：long gown. 抖包袱：reveal the jokes.

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Answer 1

【答案】A Taste for Chinese Crosstalk

Last week, I, along with my classmates, had a fruitful experience in HongXing Theatre.

On Friday our teacher told us that we were going to watch a crosstalk. On hearing the news, we were so excited that we jumped up and down.

Upon arrival, we got into the theatre, queuing quietly and orderly though we couldn’t wait to hear it. As we got seated, the show soon started. Watching and hearing two comics’ humorous dialogues on the stage, we couldn’t help bursting out laughing and giving them several rounds of applause.

After the performance, we were lucky enough to discuss the crosstalk with the comics. After knowing how to reveal the jokes and the roles they had played, some of us even put on the long gowns and tried their dialogues vividly.

On the way home, every one of us was still immersed in the atmosphere we had experienced that day because not only did we have a wonderful day, but also got a chance to experience such a fantastic Chinese traditional art form in person.

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求根据图片内容写一篇英文周记。

第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一篇英文周记；假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。上周你们班组织了一次去红星剧院观赏相声的活动。请按照以下四幅图的先后顺序，以“A Taste for Chinese Crosstalk”为题，写一篇英文周记，记述你们观赏并体验相声（crosstalk）的全过程。人称应为第一人称，时态应为一般过去时。

第2步：根据图片，确定关键信息内容：第一幅：“老师告诉我们要去看一场相声表演。听到这个消息，我们很兴奋，我们跳上跳下。”；第二幅：“我们一到剧院，就安静有序地排队，尽管我们迫不及待地想听到它。”第三幅：“在舞台上观看和聆听两名漫画演员的幽默对话，我们忍不住笑了起来，并给予他们几轮掌声。”第四幅：“我们中的一些人在知道如何展示他们的笑话和他们扮演的角色后，甚至穿上了长袍，生动地尝试了他们的对话。”

第3步：根据图片关键信息进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。