Question

8．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处，每处仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
    增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词．
    删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
    修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
    注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词：
          2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不 计分．
      Do you have cellphone？Do you like talking over the phone loudly in publicly？Yesterday，I went to school with a friend by bus．After I was sitting on the bus，a middle-aged  man came over and sat besides me．Ten minutes later．his  phone rang．I took it out and answered the call．To my  surprises，he talked loudly as if nobody was around．It was so  annoyed that some people turned around and looked into  him，but he didn't seem to mind it at a11．Talk over the phone  loudly in public isn't a good habit．I did hope such people  will change．

Answer 1

分析 在公众场合接电话要注意影响，不能太大声，建议这样的人以后需要改变．

解答 Do you have∧cellphone？Do you like talking over the phone loudly inpublicly？Yesterday，I went to school with a friend by bus．After I was sitting on the bus，a middle-aged  man came over and sat besides me．Ten minutes later．his  phone rang．I took it out and answered the call．To my  surprises，he talked loudly as if nobody was around．It was so  annoyed that some people turned around and looked into  him，but he didn't seem to mind it at a11．Talk over the phone  loudly in public isn't a good habit．I did hope such people  will change．
1．在have后加a  考查冠词． cellphone为手机，可数名词，需要加冠词．
2．publicly→public 考查名词．在公开场合为固定短语 in public．
3．after→when 考查连接词．根据句意此处是when引导时间状语从句．
4．besides→beside 考查介词．在…旁边是介词beside．
5．i→he 考查代词．根据上下文应该是他接电话．
6．surprises→surprise 考查名词，让人感到惊讶的是to one's surprise．
7．annoyed→annoying 考查形容词．此处是这件事情 令人恼火，annoyed是指人感到恼火的．
8．into→at 考查介词．look at是固定短语，看．look  into是调查．
9．talk→talking 考查动名词．此处是作为句子的主语，所以用动名词形式．
10．did→do 考查时态，文章叙述一种现在的 感想，所以需用一般现在时．

点评 解答此类试题时，需要正确分析句子成分，熟练掌握各词类的用法以及掌握一些固定搭配等．2 常见句法错误．通常表现为简单句、复合句以及疑问句、祈使句、感叹句和强调句等错误．解答此类试题时，需要掌握各类句子的句式结构及意义用法．3 应在理解文章大意的前提下，进行作答．